KWC Writer Contest! - July 13, 2010 by
admin
Kid Writers Club’ Summer Contest is here!
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Gifted ch. 6 Stays in the dorm…. - July 29, 2010 by
Asia DeBoard
That night I slept peacefully. Well, not peacefully. But I slept.
The entire night all I saw was images of someone I didn’t know. The girl had Scarlet eyes and black hair. She had creamy skin and a long thin frame. In one of the images she was smiling. Her tiny teeth were as pure as snow. Many of the times she had a dazed look in her eyes, as if she was watching something that was not there. One of the images had Leleil in it, she was so stunning in it, her electric blue eyes breath-taking……WAIT! What am I SAYING! I hardly know her! Another girl with her there in the photo as well she had blood red hair and dark eyes. That first girl……Who was she?
A sharp pain struck my forehead and I awoke.
“THAT….is what you get for dreaming about me and my sisters.” Leleil said, her fist clenched.
“Wha–? I’ve never even met your sisters! How would I know what to dream about?” I defended, rubbing the sleep from my eyes.
“You certainly know Jett enough. And you glossed over Kat so much….And me! Just for you to dream about me infuriates me!”She said throwing a pillow at me.
“Does someone in the school control dreams? I know nothing about any of these girls except you.”
Leleil looked as if she was about to answer my question when her face lit up with blush.
“KAT! I’M GONNA MURDER YOU!”
She slammed the door shut as she stormed out. I was totally confused my colors were changing like a collide-a-scope, I suddenly noticed a neatly folded outfit sitting on the floor next to my bed, a pair of shoes, and my backpack. I got up and grabbed the clothes, there was a note on top of it.
Dear Arzo
Hey dude
Listen man
Yo, Dan
Daniel, what I
Hey Arzo,
Get changed into these.
Call me with the new cellphone in your backpack, once your done
changing. Sorry. the teachers confiscated all your stuff. I
went out last night and got you some school supplies, a new
laptop, and a new cell phone, as I stated previously. I loaded
all the contacts of the teachers, faculty, and all my friends.
I didn't load Lucifer.
If you want to go to lunch together, maybe I can introduce you
to everybody.
Lov
Later.
Leleil.
I turned into that deep purple when I realized what she had just written. Leleil…..Was asking me on a date?……
I’d never…..gone on a date before………
NO! She wasn’t asking me out……No……She was……..But, I don’t know…. how I feel about……Leleil.
I got up and got dressed in the uniform. It was just a white button up, and a pair of navy blue jeans. And there was a tie. Man! I hate ties. I picked it up. it was pre-tied…….Leleil……NO! She is my roommate. Nothing more. I have to stop doing this…What would—-
“Leleil likes you.” said a sweet voice….too sweet…sweet like poison, drawing you to it. A long, lean girl with cherry red hair and black as night eyes was sitting on the window sill.”But all the Will girls do. You sure are popular, Daniel.”
“You–how did you–get in here?”
“The window–duh!” She said hopping down, and flipping her scarlet hair out behind her.
I backed up, “Who are you?”
“Kat Will. Your roommate’s sister. The dream weaver.” She spoke her voice was sickly sweet…..inviting, yet at the same time deadly.
“You– You made me have that weird dream!”
“Weird? I just put our faces into your mind….You made the dream. ”
I continued staring at her. What was going on?
“So….You like Leleil and Jett? Pity…….I really wish I was on the list……” She said playfully pouting.
“You like darker, more rebellious girls, eh? I guess I’ll just have to step my game…” She said backing up towards the window, then sitting on the ledge again.”Buh-Bye, now, love.” She let go of the sill and fell backwards, out the open window.
“Wait! Kat! KAT!” I shouted out the window. I looked around outside…No one.
I grabbed my backpack, it’s contents so carefully organized, I searched through the pockets then finally found my cell phone I looked at the speed dial list on my phone:
1. voice-mail
2. Leleil
3. Mr. Yamada
4. Griffon
I didn’t read more after that I punched the 2 button and listened to the dial tone.
"Heya, this is Lei. Leave a message!"
“Leleil! Your sister just—-Kat just—-just hurry over to the dorm!” I sputtered, barely comprehensible.
"Bleeeeeep! Gotcha! I'm not the voice-mail! What happened, Colorés?"
“Kat she—”
"KAT!?"
“Yeah, she just jumped out the window!”
"Hang on, Skittles. I'm getting Erik to teleport me right now!
“Okay…But…Your sister….”
"I know, I know. She's a little witch. She listens in, and manipulates
your dreams, just to embarrass you later.I'm embarrassed that she's my
older sister more than anything...that HAG....Anyway what did she say?"
I remained silent. No way….There is no way I could tell her…..
"Dan, tell me what she said. I can still read your mind through the
phone."
“Your bluffing….”
"Ar, I'm being completely honest.....You don't want me to know it...
You'd rather face the Devil than tell me...."
“So no matter what—” I started, then a cloud of smoke appeared in font of me, once the smoke cleared, there was Leleil and a boy holding hands in front of me, the boy had tan skin and shaggy black hair, Erik, I presumed.
Leleil slid her hand out of his once she saw me. He blushed once he had followed her gaze, and seen me.
“Sorry, to teleport with something or someone I have to be touching them…..sorry.” He said casting his eyes down. Did he…….fear me? Or was it respect? Either way, to cast his eyes down and blush at me, why…….Oh, man…..Did he think Leleil an d I were an item!?
“Don’t worry about it, Erik, me and Dan are just friends. Now where is she?” That last part was directed to me. Erik detected that he was no longer needed and teleported away.
“She jumped out the window.”
“So she just came in then left?”
“You could say that.”
“What did she say?”
“Uhhhh…….” I really didn’t want her to know……what Kat had said…was just too embarrassing!
She looked at me seriously as she read my mind,
” ‘Leleil likes you…….But all the Will girls do……Leleil and Jett? Pity…….I really wish I was……You like……….eh?………guess…….. my game………..now, love…..’ “
“Leleil! You read my mind!”
“Only the bits you allowed me to.” She said sticking out her tongue, and then pouting. “So, you like Jett, too? Aw, geez. I thought I’d have you all to my self….”
“I don’t like Jett!”
“Oh really?”
“Yeah.”
“Then why don’t I take you to meet her and then we’ll see.” Leleil said grabbing my arm, “Hurry up! We only have an hour before school starts!”
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Leleil had dragged me halfway across the campus, twiddling on her phone, then finally she opened the door to a classroom. The entire room was full of all sorts of teens, beautiful and ghastly, hardly noticeable and super human, quiet and loud, and in the class room, everyone I had met so far, plus more, were there. Karen sat in the back of the room, surrounded by men, Griffon and a tiny girl with auburn hair leaned against their desks chatting. Lucifer sat in a dark corner, eying Leleil the whole time. Erik was hurriedly reporting to Kat who, stared at me with this day-dreaming like gaze. A tall and thin girl with creamy skin and black hair, crimson eyes and tiny, pearl-white teeth, was focused on the notebook she was writing away in.
“That’s her. That’s my baby sister Jett.”
Leleil let go of my arm, and gave me a push in Jett’s direction.
Jett looked up, I noticed her entire face was coated in piercings, a nose ring, a tongue ring, a lip ring. Studs, and gauges. Her black hair was in and emo style and her nails were in a red-black pattern. I turned deep purple, she was gorgeous.
“Yes?”
“Uh. I’m Dan.”
“Heya. I’m Jett. So you’re the new kid. The color guy?”
“Yeah that’s me.”
“So you’re my big sister’s roommate?”
“Yeah.”
“You really are that really cool looking guy from my dream!”
I froze. Cool? She thought I was cool. I smiled.
“The seat next to me is open….Wanna sit there?”
My smile got bigger. “Yeah, I will. ” I sat down and I looked around the room.
Griffon gave me a thumbs up, the Auburn haired girl beamed. Leleil looked happy, yet at the same time sad. Lucifer, who had his arm around Leleil smirked. Kat looked kinda angry. Erik looked relieved. Karen and much of the rest of the room was totally oblivious to this amazing moment in my life. Jett smiled and tossed a note at me.
I’m really glad you wanted to sit next to me. Welcome to Gala-Ivy School!
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Authors Note ~ “Emma and the Reseprecans” has been changed to “The Reseprecans”. Thanks! Here’s the first part!!! ~ Raqshan
I am Emma Silk. A 13 year old who lives in a small town in the upper east-side of New York. We in this town, we can NEVER leave, bacause we know a really big secret. There are people in this world who can fly, turn in wolves, make illusions and other wierd stuff. I know what you’re thinking. I’m crazy, right? Well, that’s really good. Don’t believe a word I say ’cause if you do, you’ll sound nuts to the people around you. I’m going to tell you about me. I didn’t find out that I was a Reseprecan until I was 13. Even then there were many things I had to learn.
It all happen on one fateful day in June. It was really warm and my best friend, Sandy Locks and I were strolling through the woods. Yes, woods. The Reseprecans ordered that there be at least four acres of wood in the town. Anyway, we walking, talking about next year and the latest movies and stuff like that.
“I’m going to get my hair dyed white!!” Sandy told me. Sandy really liked to do bissare things.
“That would look wiered,” I commented.
“On you maybe. Blonde hair looks good on you, but brown hair is not my thing,” Sandy shot back.
“Hey, lets, race,” I suggested,” Who ever loses has to buy the winner an ice-cream!”
“You’re on,” Sandy said.
“Ready. Set Go!” I shouted. We tore through the trees, doging trucks and low hanging branches. I was never to reach the end. We were following a path see and while I was racing, I had veered off it. I stopped running. I retraced my steps. There was no path. Only trees, trees, and more trees.
I gulped. The adults around town were always warning us about staying on the path. They said something roamed the woods. I tried to keep calm and find the path. I searched for about ten minutes before I heard a snarl. I ran. As I raced through the brush, I could hear the loud thumpping of another shape chasing me. I was running when I ran into a clearing. I was trying to choose which way to go, when a deep growl came from right behing me. Slowy, I turned. Most people would have run, but I was a little curiouse as to what this beast looked like.
There at least a foot in front of me was a the bigest wolf. It bared its fangs, but didn’t growl.
“Oh my god,” I breathed. Then, the thing spoke.
“What are you doing in these woods?” he seemed to say.
“I..um..that is..” I tried to say.
“Never mind,” he growled,” I want to know, how you can see me!”
I reclaimed my witts,” Well, let me think. I guess I’m not supposed to see a wolf the size of grizzly bear, huh?”
“No, you’re not,” he said, puzzled. Then something happened. The wolf disolved into silver light and in its place stood a boy, about my age. He had dark hair and brown eyes. He wore a dark blue-plaid button up with the sleeves rolled up. Dark skinnny jeans covered his legs.
I freaked out then. I wanted to chang into a bird and fly away from this wolf-changing boy. As soon as I thought it, my wish came true.
First a tingling krept up my spine and I felt sick. I closed my eyes. When I opened them again, I was still in the clearing, but the wolf-changing boy had grown really big. He was at least 14 feet above me. What’s more he was staring at me as if I was the one who had changed shape.
I looked down, because I didn’t want to see his face anymore. That’s when I noticed the talons. They were sharp and small. They looked like they could scoop up a fish and turn it into a fish cabab at the same time. Then I saw the feathers. They were brown and really pretty. I opened my mouth to speak, but a,” Cawww!” came out. I screamed, which sound like,” Sreaaaaaaaaaac!”
The boy seemed to snap out of his daze and imedietly scooped my up. Then he walked briskly out of the clearing.
That’s when I blacked out.
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When I came to, I wasn’t in the clearing anymore. I lay on a bed in the corner of a large doctor’s office. It was dim and I had a hard time focusing. When everything became clear, I could see that I lay on a smal cot and I was human again. That was good. The next thing I noticed was that there was a young man sitting behing a mahogany desk. He looked about 20 years old, but his hair was white.
“Um..excuse me?” I croaked.
The man looked up from the book he was reading. He had cheerfull face and right now he was smiling,” Emma Silk, right?”
“Um..yes, sir,” i managed. My throat was ruff and sratchy. It hurt to swallow.
“Here,” he go up and walked over to me with a glass of water. He handed it to me and I took it. I sipped it and recoiled at the taste. It was cross between honey and…cream?
“W-what’s this?” I asked.
“It’s called Relecan Jucie. Only for Reseprecans,” he said.
I choked,” Only for Reseprecans? Then why did you give it to me?”
“Think, Emma. I know you can guess,” he turned and took out a small book from his desk.
I had a feeling I knew, but I didn’t want to admit it.
“I don’t know!” I cried.
The man sighed,”Okay, then, I’ll tell you. You’re a Reseprecan”
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This is a story called Emma and the Reseprecans (Res-ep-re-cans). Reseprecans are people with talents. Leave comments to tell me wether you like it or not! Hope you enjoy ! ~ Raqshan
Prologue:
It was night. The winter solstice to be exact. Frost cover the pine forest and snow lay thickly on the ground. It was January 3, 1969. The coldest winter in the history of this town. Yes, the town of the Reseprecans. The Reseprecans are human. They are regular mortals with the unique powers. Every day on a Season Solstice they hold an anual meeting at the old castle.
Right now they sat around an large oval table, all 12 of them. They discussed problems and came up with sulutions. But this Winter Solstice meeting held a big surpries for some of the Reseprecans.
“We should be able to command them!” Larten shouted. His dark black hair covered his eyes and his voice was evil,” The humans diserve no respct! They are weak! They should be in our command!” Outside the dark seemed unbareble. Ghosts seemed to move even more than usual, as if supporting the Speaker of the Dead (Larten).
“As is you are the strongest in the town, Larten!” Faren, Mistress of Light tried to reason over the oval table,” If we command the town, then it would be caotic! We could never agree!”
“That is why, only ONE should rule! And in my opinion,” Larten said,” since I came up with the plan, I should cammand this town!”
“I agree!” Janton, Master of the Shadows called,” Lartens, should rule!”
“I have to disagree,” Cendre, Knower of Imotions disagreed,” The humans know they are not as strong as us. They are doing fine without our interference. We only have to put in little effort to make them do what we want!”
“Yes, but then we wouldn’t be showing them our FULL power!” Falcon, Talker of Creatures, spoke up,” They already dare to defy us.”
“Oh, Falcon,” Cendre chided,” You’re only speaking like that because a human refused to marry you!”
Falcon ignored her,” They dare to set up buildings where we have claimed land! They say it the LAW! That we have to sign papers to own land is rediculase!! We practicallt own the town!”
“But, Falcon,” Gina, Controller of Sound and Sight, asked,” They live here do’t they? I mean, if you were to have children and those children would be forced to live in this town, wouldn’t you want the best for them?”
“Pa!” Haris, Controller of Fire said,” As if! If I were them, I wouldn’t have moved into this town in the first place! Then, this trouble would never have started!”
“They thought it was a normal town, Haris,” Eagle, Master of the Skies, told him,” They thought it was a safe town. After all our logo is; Safe for the Unsafe.”
“Yes, but that was meant for Reseprecans to come if they found us!” Larten shouted.
“This meeting is ujurned!” Gina called,” Some of us can’t controll our selves!”
With that, Gina, Controller of sound and sight stood up. The rest of the Reseprecans followed, their robes and cloaks swishing. They darted dark looks at each other as they exited the meeting hall.
That was the Prologue! If you like the plot, then keep on reading Emma and the Reseprecans!
P.S. If you like this of even if you don’t tell me, so that I can improve it, or continue!
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Bloodthirst Characters - July 26, 2010 by
Tania
These are the characters most comonly seen in Bloodthrist,but I decided to draw them more realistic then anime,because I am horrible in computer anime.
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The good
Azia

Deilian

Hilio

The Bad
Silvia

Zador

The clueless
Kiera

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Bloodthirst Concept art - July 26, 2010 by
Tania
well now since my Idea has been jerked out of underneath me I am going to take the drawings into my own hands:Just got Silvia done,unfortuanatly the coloring is harder than the drawing on the computer so it’s not colored.
Silvia

(the computer made it all pixilated and weird)
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Later Griffon left with a full stomach and sticky fingers. I flopped down on my bed, My dorm here was….more me… than my room in life as a human.
I looked at Leleil. She had her short black hair in a tiny pony-tail. Her highlights looked like lightning. She Had picked up her pastels and started coloring the picture she did of me. She did it with such care, yet so little effort, her cyan eyes glossed over the page. Then looked up at me.
My skin changed to deep purple again. She slammed her hand down on the bed, playfully. “Stop changing colors! it’s so hard to capture something like you into a picture.”My skin changed into a gray then.
“What do think my colors mean?” I asked smiling at her.
“I assume you can control pigments in objects, but seeing is to how you can’t control it changes with mood.”
“Any idea what each color means?”
“Want me to experiment?”
“Sure.” I said smirking. I had no idea what she was going to do. I sat up and looked right at her.
She sat next to me and wrapped her arms around my neck in a sort of hug or something.
My gray skin changed to that purple again.
She remained like that for a while, then she slapped me hard. My skin turned gray again. “L-Leleil?” I asked.
Then she punched me in the arm. I turned red.
“Leleil! How is physically abusing me investigating my powers!?”She smiled. Then giggled. I shook my head at her. I turned yellow. “You’re the weirdest girl I’ve ever met.”
She looked at me then, fell over, I jumped. What had just happened? “Leleil?” She continued to lay there.
“Leleil, are you okay?” No response.
“Oh God, Leleil.” I got down off the bed, my skin changing to as black as her carpet.
“Leleil…..” I leaned down close to listen if she was breathing…..No…..Oh God….What just happened?
I started preforming CPR. The first thing that came to mind. No response..I turned white as snow….Leleil was dead.
My skin changed to a chalky blue. My eyes teared up and I scooped her up in my arms. I started walking over to her bed when she snapped her eyes open and shouted, “BOO!” I jumped, my skin changed to white again, then to pink.
“I’m alive. You can put me down.” she said, toying with me. I changed to a green, the back to yellow.
“Oh my God, Leleil. You’re okay.” I hugged her tightly.
“Oof! I can hold my breathe three and a half minutes long. I’m fine.” She said strained, I released her.” Well, it’s just as I thought. Your moods match this,” she said opening a door in her nightstand. “In this drawer, I keep every gift that Griffon has ever got me. We’ve known each other since we were nine, so we’re pretty much like siblings…..Here we are.” She said as she pulled out a tiny ring box. She opened it to reveal a cheap, dollar store mood ring, and with it a chart.”Your skin follows a mood ring’s chart, stressed is black, white is fear, yellow; happy. pink; confused, Ect.”
I smiled and turned yellow. “So what’s that purple I keep changing into?”
Leleil smiled her wicked smile and the said one word. The most scary word I had ever heard. “Love.”
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Gifted ch. 4 Are Enemies - July 26, 2010 by
Asia DeBoard
“Products of the Mind?” I asked, purposely speaking without thinking, just he idea of Leleil reading my mind made me shiver, she was so creepy.
“Illusions, thoughts, memories, oh and my most powerful move, shutting off functions in the Brain…..Oh and I am not creepy.”Leleil said adding a second coat of black nail-polish to her ring finger.
“Sorry……”
“It’s cool. I was freaked out when it first happened to me. Totally confused everyone when I started answering questioned nobody asked out loud.”
“Who brought you here?”
“Lucifer.”
“Who’d ever name their child that?”
Leleil looked at me seriously. “It’s an alias. Once we leave our normal lives we can’t be who we once were. My given name is Brooke Lonvias, I love the Night and I always wanted to change my name. I have two aliases; Midnight Lee and Leleil Will.”
“Whoa. That’s cool. Hey, what’s—?”
Suddenly the door knob started to jiggle and then there was a boom.
“Lucifer, you’re turning it the wrong way again. Just Shadow-step through.”
A boy seemed to come out of the wall, beaming at Leleil, then once he saw me sitting on her bed with her. He suddenly stopped smiling. “Hey Lei, who’s the loser?”
“Lucifer! He is not a loser! He has a very cool power!” Leleil said defending me.
“Cooler than mine?” He spoke, shocked.
“I never said that!” Leleil cried.
“Lei, let me see your sketchbook.” Lucifer demanded.
“No.” she said quietly.
“Fine, I’ll just Shade him into the center of the Earth.”He threatened holding onto my shirt collar.
“No! Please!”Leleil sobbed, embracing me.
“Lei…….Who is this guy?”
“Dan Thomas.”
“No, his alias….And power.”
The two looked at me.
“Uh……Arzo Bell, uh…….color.”
“COLOR!? You left Me to Crayola over there!?”He shouted at Leleil.
My flesh went crimson, I was furious. “Leave her alone! Who are you to her anyway!? Her boyfriend? Brother?”
“I’m her—–Forget it, Crayola. I want you to know though…She’s mine. You can have Karen.”
“What are you talking about? I don’t like Karen! I don’t like anybody! This girl just kidnapped me! Romance is pointless!“I shouted at him.
Leleil hid her face in her pillow choking on her sobs. “Get out! Leo! Just…..Get out!”
Lucifer took a step back then turned on his heel and ran, once again through the wall. For long moments I sat on the plain white bed across the room from her. She cried for a long time. Then sat up.
“I’m so sorry, Da—Arzo?”
“My real mom……She was a writer…..Arzo was one of her favorite characters.”
“I sincerely apologize. I’m so sorry! Lucifer…He…”
“Don’t apologize, I stepped on his toes seeing is to how, ‘Your his’.”
“No. I’m not. He obsessed. He never leaves me alone. I’ve rejected him more times than I can remember.”
“Other than the loud part…He’s a pretty cool guy.”
“He was nice at first. Then when he brought me here he got all weird and he started checking up on me all the time. If I even try to sketch something that he doesn’t like he tears it up…The only reason I don’t just erase me from his mind is…..I owe him…..He did something for me….He helped me escape my foster parents. I never met my real ones.”
“You owe him nothing. If anything, he owes you. Think of all the memories, the art, your chances to meet your parents, he ruined it all. As long as I’m around I won’t let him do anything to harm you.”
Leleil smiled at me, not her wicked playful smile, but a happy thankful smile. She ran across the room and hugged me tightly, weeping.
My skin changed to a deep purple.
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Later, after Leleil had stopped crying. She started helping me decorate my side of the room. We took all the furniture out and stored it in a spare room next door to ours.
“Now the fun part.” Leliel said lifting several large buckets of paint.”What’s your favorite color?”
“I like them all.” I said smiling at her, she could read my mind, she already knew what I wanted to do.
We both picked up a gigantic bucket of paint and threw it at the wall, we tore up the white carpeting, and waxed the hard wood floor. We threw out my white sheets that were on my bed that we had used as coverage for the floor while we were painting and Leleil and I lifted my bed back into the room. Leleil picked up her cellphone. She hit the speed dial and started talking.
“Hey, Griffon. Can you make a run to the store for me?……That really cool bedset that we saw………….Yeah. Oh wait, no. I have snacks don’t worry…. I just need the bedset……..uh, twin sized….Yeah……Thanks……….Oh, no one told you? We have a new student……….Yeah he’s my roommate……..’Kay……see ‘ya….Bye.” She said into the phone.
“Oo wa zat?” I said through a mouth full of potato chips, tossing a soda to Leleil.
“Thanks. Griffon, one of my friends, don’t worry, he’s nothing like Lucifer.”
“At’s ool.”
“Dan, swallow.”
“Sorry. Hey. You call me Dan…I get to call you Brooke.”
“Fine. Arzo. Just remember to chew.”
“Oh ha ha ha.”
“Ya know what? I like you kid. You remind me of myself my first couple days here. You may just be converted to rebel.” She said with a smile.
“Oh ho, I don’t think so.”
She cupped her hand over her mouth to make it sound scary. “Join the Dark side, we have skittles.” She threw green one and I caught it in my mouth. The door opened.
“Hey hey hey. I see skittles.” said a red headed boy with glasses carrying a bag.
“Sorry, the rainbow must go to the rainbow.” Leleil said laughing. “But the legend get’s Oreos.” She tossed a bag of cookies at the redhead.
“I shalt never doubt the Snack-keeper.”He said.
“Now….we need to make your bed.” The red head took out two sheets, a comforter, and a pillow, all rainbow tie-dyed. We made my bed quickly.
Leleil tossed another skittle at my head, it hit my forehead and bounced off, the boy caught it in his mouth.”Rebound.”
Leleil laughed out loud. “Da–Arzo this is my friend Griffon. Griffon, Arzo.”
“Nice ta meet cha.” Griffon said, chewing on my skittle.
“Likewise.” I said, this time catching a pink one in my mouth.
“So was ya powa?”
“What?”
“Swallow, Griffon.” Leleil said.
“Sorry. What’s your power?”
“Color.”
“I’m gonna call you Roseart then.” He said taking a large bite out of his Oreo.
Leleil bust into the conversation. “Okay guys. Serious time. I think Karen is scheming again. She used her full power on Arzo when we were recruiting him two days ago.”
I choked on my potato chips. “TWO DAYS AGO!? How long was I asleep?”
“A while. I told you, she used her full power.”
“We’re not allowed to use our full power at school, because most of the time, our full power is deadly.”Griffon explained.
“I can turn off functions in the brain, Griffon can rewrite history, and Karen……Karen can make you her slave, she manipulates your physical body.”
“She’s a witch.”Griffon added.
“Lisa McDarce, alias Karen White. Can not be trusted.
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Yay! More concept art! Today is Charlie’s girlfriend Andrea!

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Okay people! Here are some drawings by me of the cast of Gifted! Yep, Dan, Karen, Leleil, Lucifer, Charlie and Griffon! All your favorites! But I’m an artist…….It’s not okay if you steal my art…Okay? Want it? Just ask. Ask though. Or I’ll go all Gala on you!






Oops! You guys haven’t met Griffon or Lucifer yet! Oh well. They’re coming!
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Author’s note: Haha! Finally gotta chance to bring in a character based on myself…..Sorry…I’ve just always wanted to…..I’m really just like Leliel…..Except I have brunette hair with blue highlights and I have mahogany eyes….not electric blue….haha. Other than that We’re twins in every aspect….especially when it comes to her personality.
*knock* knock* knock*
Mine and Charlie’s heads snapped simultaneously toward the door.
“Oh no……They followed me….” I said looking around the room frantically for a place to hide.
“Who, oh wise Pigment-man?”
“Shut up Charlie….The Cops!”
Suddenly the door opened. My eyes widened, yet another shocking moment tonight, my face turned a deep purple. Charlie dropped his cell phone and took a step backward.
It wasn’t the cops………And it was even more scary then my step-mom’s chili…….
Standing in the doorway of Charlie’s garage-bedroom was Karen……Karen White. Her tiny heart shaped face grinned majestically, her long blonde hair falling symmetrically down to her waist. Standing next to her was a girl whom I think was also a new girl that day, she had short choppy black hair with electric blue highlights that matched her eyes, her lips laden in violet gloss, oh Lord…Leliel Will…the Punk-Rocker that got detention on her first day even before the first period.
“Ah…..Come ON! Not another that saw……I’ve had to wipe six minds! His entire family and three cops! Then I had manipulate another to change the police record!” complained Leleil. She walked straight up to Charlie and placed her hand on his face. “Hey Charlie. Yes…..You are right…This is a dream…….After all…..Does Dan really change colors?….Do you really believe that ‘Karie’ and ‘Willy’ would be in your room? And for that matter…..Where is Andrea? Your girlfriend? Your a pig! Dreaming of two other girls being in your room so late at night. This dream is slowing changing to a nightmare…..Your showing your true colors……You’re lucky this is a dream. Tomorrow, when you wake up. Go over to Andrea’s house. Drive her to school, carry her books. Forget about Dan, Karen and me. We’re leaving. And never coming back.”
Charlie backed up, laid down in his bed and went to sleep.
I gawked at Leleil. “Wha-? Leaving? Where?”
“We’re going to Galaivy: School for the Gifted. The place where Karen and I really go to school. And the place where you have gotten a ‘scholorship’ or–well a better way to put it is; involuntary invitation.”
“NO.”
“We thought you’d say that.” Leleil said with an evil smile.
Suddenly a set of warm lips pressed to cheek and I stumbled, my eyes shut and I drifted into sleep.
The last thing I heard before I was totally out was, “Oh, I may have used my power a bit much. It was only supposed to make him temporarily paralyzed.”
“You’re evil. You meant to do that to him! God have mercy on you.”
“Oh you sound like you genuinely worried. And I’m an atheist.”
“She-devil.”
“Oh….But isn’t Lucifer your fanboy?”
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I woke in a cold sweat and looked around crazily. I was in a room I’d never been in before, the walls were plain white on one side and on the other it was painted black and purple striped and had four or five posters of Rock bands hanging up. On one half the carpet was jet blacks and on the other there was a beige one. Then I looked at a bookshelf; practically bursting with books of every kind except on one shelf. On that shelf, there were dozens of jars of Semi-Permanent hair dye. And lying in the bed across the room from me was….Leleil. She hadn’t noticed me being awake because she was so engrossed in what she was doing.
I stood and walked over to where she was. Once I stepped on the black carpet I felt as though I had stepped into another world, a rebellious punk world. I peered over Leleil’s shoulder to see her sketching someone…..she was sketching….me. Her hand moved over the page with such skill, it was like looking at a photograph. The pencil seemed like an extension of her hand. I backed up. She was sketching…..me? I pretended to look at the books, but the entire time I was looking at her out of the corner of my eye.
“So……When did it start?” She asked out of the blue, I jumped at the broken silence. She sat up and turned to face me. She put down her pencil and picked up some color pastels.
“What?”
“The illness. Every Gala get incredibly sick right before their gift shows itself….So….When?”
I thought hard…
When….hmm…….I didn’t feel well starting third period….. but I fainted in the Cafeteria…..
“I meant the vomiting”
“Wha? How did you know what I was thinking?”
Leleil smiled with her wicked grin, “I can do whatever I want when it comes to The Products of the Mind.”
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Lucielle Concept Art - July 23, 2010 by
FranticHope

Drew Lucielle today. Drawing Azia and Silvia from Tania’s Bloodthirst starting tomorrow. If you steal my picture, I will gladly sue you, loves.
Lucielle: You sound really serious about that.
Me: I don’t particularly want to google ‘lucielle pics’ and find this on some other persons website without my knowing it.
JUST SO YOU KNOW, THE HEART ON HER ARM IS NOT A TATOO. IT IS SIMPLY SOMETHING SHE DREW ON HER ARM WITH WASHABLE MARKERS. Basically, it won’t be in the next picture she’s in, but it may be a smiley face.
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One Queen - July 23, 2010 by
cacarrier
One queen had many pets: two goldfish, three cats, four dogs, five guinea pigs, and three rabbits. She didn’t like them. She asked this person. The person’s name was Brooke. She asked if they could trade pets. And the queen said yes. She said, ” One guinea pig, for two goldfish.” It was a little bit quieter at the palace. And she fed the pets. She grabbed a guinea pig. It was a very squeaky one. She asked Brooke if they could trade. One guinea pig for one g0ldfish. Now he has five goldfish, three cats, four dogs, three guinea pigs, and three rabbits. That’s AWESOME!!!!
P.S. from Cacarrier: My little sister wrote this. She is six. Enjoy!
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The Lunch Election Part 3 - July 23, 2010 by
cacarrier
Eric was the first to respond. “3.1415!” he exclaimed. “Oh, Eric, I’m so sorry, that is incorrect!” “How would you know?” Eric asked angrily. “That’s the wrong pie! You are now invalid to answer!” “A round pastry often filled with fruit, considered delicious by many people?” Matthew looked embarrassed that he had answered. “Yes, correct!” I said.
“It’s intese today in the stadium at the Kid 4 Prez election. Once again this is your host, Caroline. Matthew in the lead with zero votes and three question answers! Let’s hear it for Matt! Eric tied with Erin for second with two votes and no question answers! How about some applause for them! Next question! How does one spell “matriarch”?”
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Fairy Tales - July 22, 2010 by
Ditanie
Part 1
Snow White
‘Once upon a time in the middle of winter, when the flakes of snow were falling like feathers from the sky, a queen …’ SLAM! I closed the book. I hate books. Especially princess books. I always wondered why people spent time writing dumb books more than inventing new video games or T.V. shows.
Just then, my mother called him to her room. I knew exactly what my mother was going to say. When I entered my mother’s room, I noticed my mother’s round belly was bigger. My mother started to speak, “Now, Pete, your baby sister is going to arrive soon and you…”
“Have a lot of responsibilities.” I finished for her.
“Right.” She replied, slightly blushing.
I never liked it when my mother blushed. But this time, she was blushing with excitement, happiness, and thanks. I liked that. The last time my mother blushed was that of embarrassment, but that is a long story.
My mother shooed me out, muttering under her breath things like, “I need some alone time” or, “Young kids need fresh air.”
Fresh air? No way. I went straight up to the den where my Wii stood silently, waiting for the user to use it. Well, duh.
“The Wii is for playing.” I muttered to myself. I put my best Mario chip in, and turned the Wii on.
Nothing. I punched the button.
Still nothing. I kicked, punched, and head butted the button.
Nothing. I panicked. I could never live without a Wii!
I screamed and screamed. My mother came running for her life! “What’s the matter?” She screamed.
“The Wii won’t turn on!” I cried, desperate. My mother looked very cross.
“Off to your room. Now. Do not come out until you read Snow White cover to cover.” I nodded grimly and stomped to my room.
As I trotted up to my room, a brilliant idea came to my mind. I would read Snow White, and my mother would think I did a great job! It was a silly idea, but I was young then.
‘Once upon a time in the middle of winter, when the flakes of snow were falling like feathers from the sky, a queen sat at a window sewing, and the frame of the window was made of black ebony. And whilst she was sewing and looking out of the window at the snow, she pricked her finger with the needle, and three drops of blood fell upon the snow. And the red looked pretty upon the white snow, and she thought to her, would that I had a child as white as snow, as red as blood, and as black as the wood of the window-frame.
Soon after that she had a little daughter, who was as white as snow, and as red as blood, and her hair was as black as ebony, and she was therefore called little snow-white. And when the child was born, the queen died.
After a year had passed the king took to himself another wife. She was a beautiful woman, but proud and haughty, and she could not bear that anyone else could surpass her in beauty. She had a wonderful looking-glass, and when she stood in front of it and looked at herself in it, and said, looking-glass, looking-glass, on the wall, who in this land is the fairest of all.
The looking-glass answered, thou, o queen, art the fairest of all.
Then she was satisfied, for she knew that the looking-glass spoke the truth.’
I read and read. I finished at about 1:30pm. I had started at 11:55am. What a waste of time! I thought to myself.
My mother soon gave me a command to write a summary. I hated writing. I had no choice. I went on with the wretched sport.
I worked all day long trying to form a summery. At last, at 5:27pm, I completed my work.
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Gifted ch. 2 I Was Wrong. - July 22, 2010 by
Asia DeBoard
I was pale. Green in the face. My eyes bloodshot. My breath came in large gasps. I was crouched over the toilet at 4:15 a.m. On a school day.
Aw, Man! School!I’m sick and I’m going to miss school! I’ve never missed school a day in my life.
I stood shakily and looked in the mirror. I’m being quite literal now, I looked as though I had eaten my stepmom’s cooking, and God, I’d rather eat food given to me by the crazy old cat woman that lives next door.
I smacked my lips, I hated that taste in your mouth after having vomited. I grabbed the listerine and took a large swig. It burned. I spit it out. Blood came with. Lots of Blood. My shakey hands went instantly to my mouth.No more blood not even a wound. I ran into my sister, Nicole’s Room.
“Nikki! Let me borrow a flashlight to see why my mouth is bleeding.”I whispered loudly. No use. When Nicole Thomas is out. She’s OUT.
Nicole was in her rocking chair, she must have fallen asleep reading The Berenstain Bears: Papa’s Pizza for the zillionth time. I grabbed the flashlight under pillow and turned around to find something I never thought I’d see ever.
Nicole had grabbed her Pucker face Sour Spray and aimed it at me as though it were pepper spray, her tiny five year old eyes round with fear. She breathed in deep then screamed as loud as she could.
“DADDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A STRANGER IS IN MY ROOM!!!!!!!!!
I froze. Stranger? Do I look weird when I sick? I ran to my room with my dad on my heels. I grabbed my backpack(it held everything I’d ever need. Snacks, my gym clothes, and my cellphone. I jumped out my window, not a big deal since It’s only the first floor.
“Erin! Call the cops! Some punk broke into our house and Daniel is missing!”
Daniel is missing? I’m Daniel! What the heck is going on!?
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I ran all the way to Charlie’s house A block and a half away. I ran into their garage’s side door. Charlie’s parents had remodeled their entire four car garage into an AWESOME pad for Charlie. Charlie was up as usual, listening to music and texting Andrea, his girlfriend.
“Dude! The heck!? Get out! You’re trespassing on private property!”
“Wasn’t it you who said I was a part of the family as long as I brought snacks?”
“Dan!? Is that you!?”
“I don’t know what happened man! I was puking my guts out all day, I go to use some mouthwash and Suddenly I’m spitting up random blood, Look like a complete stranger to everyone but myself, and—What?”
“Dan……I don’t know how to say this to you I’m going to text it to you.”
“Uh, okay.”
Dan.......You're Pink.........
“What?”
“Man, I’ll try and put this into simpler terms, *ahem* YOUR FLESH IS NEON PINK! *ahem* Thank you.”
I gritted my teeth in frustration. “Charles Alexander Monroe……….Now is not the time to be playing jokes……”
“Ohhhh………Now your red………”
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Author’s note: I write stories with girl main characters all the time, it’s easy since I’m a girl, but I’m taking the challenge of writing the main character as a guy. Wish me luck! ~Asia ♥
I stared at the board in fifth period Science class, letting Mrs. Wainhamer yammer on about the tectonic plates. Suddenly I felt something slice the back of my hand. It stung, papercut, had to be my bestfriend Charlie passing me a note.
I switched my hands position grabbing the bit of paper from him, not changing my expression or even moving my head from where it was. I waited for free study, the last five minutes of class where Wainhamer goes to the bathroom every day, to read the not.
The Note was in the form of his way of texting, god, I hate it when he writes like that.
Yo, ya seen her yet? Dat Haut new Chik?
I looked at him seriously and I wrote back.
What? You know, full well, that I can’t understand a single word of that.
He laughed at what i wrote then tossed his reponce back at me.
What I was asking you, Mr. Perfect, was whether or not you had seen the new girl, you know, that ungodly beautiful one.
I sighed. What was wrong with my generation? Constantly fussing over the opposite gender, especially the ones that they are attracted to.
No, I haven’t.
He looked at me with suprise and then wrote back in his usual formating.
Lets tak bout it @ lunch.
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“Okay, what was it you were telling me?” I asked Charlie at lunch.
“That.” He said nodding in the direction of what I assumed was ‘Dat haut new Chik.’ “That, my dear Danny, is Karie White. True Angel and is in my third period choir class.”
All the words he said came out in a very slow motion. All the sounds of the noisy cafeteria became muffled and, for a moment it seemed as though time had stopped. Karen White. Karen. Karen. Karen. What a perfect name. Karen. The angelic girl turned in my direction with a red face and I suddenly snapped back to reality. I turned to Charlie and stared up a fake conversation, my own face as red as a tomato.
The bell ringed, Karen got up with her tray and with fast fluid motions reached the exit door with her friends at her heels. They started talking and she started to laugh. So pure so wondrous.
What was wrong with me? My heart in my throat, I stood with Charlie and walked to the door, dropping the entire tray in the trash can instead of placing the dirty tray on the rack.
Charlie looked at me with worry, “You alright, man. You seem pale.”
I looked at him and a sudden surge of pain struck me as though I had been electrocuted. My heart sank from my throat to my stomach and My face turned green.
Charlie’s eyes got big. “Dude! You never get sick! What’s wrong?”
I started to faint. “Never…….eat……Meatloaf-tacos……..”
I was out. And not for the reason I thought. Sure the Cafeteria food was terrible. But the reason was much worse. The reason. The reason was……….
HRRRRRRUEEEECCCCCCKKKKK!!!
Ugh…..nevermind…..I’ll tell you after I stop puke—-
HRRRRRUEEEEEEEEEECKKKK!!!!!
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Bloodthirst Chpt3 Prt1 - July 20, 2010 by
Tania
Deilian shook his head”we are going to die,we are going to die,we are going to die.”he repeated like a crazed man.I stiffened,he had saved my life countless times now it was time I repay him. I gripped his shoulder tighter and pulled him out of his chair,he seemed to be in a trance,not responding to anything,but he kept mumbling those wretched words.”Deilian?”I asked quietly “Deilian.”I said louder frustration and fear taking over.”DEILIAN!”I shouted,suddenly his eyes cleared and he looked as if I had just dumped a bucket of cold water onto his head.I let go off him,hoping he would stand “we have to leave now.”I told him quietly.He nodded “But first we need to hunt,and then we will leave.”he said grabbing my arm and pulling me out of the door.We walked at a normal human pace until we were in the woods.There he let go of my arm,and we ran.I closed my eyes ,sure we were in the country-side now, and searched for scents.There was the heavy,musky scent of a heard of white-tailed deer,the sharp overpowering stench of fox,several small forest creatures….and then there was the sweet juicy scent of human.A smile crept across my face and I opened my eyes,I noticed that Deilian was heading toward the scent too,I could smell more than one human,which was good.I could hear the shallow breathing as if they were tired and the blood pumping through them.My mouth watered and I dropped into a hunting crouch,all my scenses trained on the spot of heat that was like a sign saying “FOOD” in big red letters.
okay so they do hunt humans and I am not sure if I should do the hunting seen.Reply
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Chapter Four: I get an Underwater Breatheing dog for a Mascot

“A dog?” I asked. Deep down inside I felt a little flare of jealousy. Annabeth got a fox and Tancred got an owl.Neither of those were not your every day animals.
”Yes, a dog,” Charlie replied heading for the door,” Come on, let’s go get the puppy.”
I heaved a sigh. I was getting tired, but I followed my dad outside.
To my right the sun hovered over the glittering expance of salt-water getting ready to set.
”Come,” Charlie called. He was standing in the center of sitting logs that were positioned to create a circle.
I walked over to him and he patted a large golden colored log that sat in the center of the ring of logs.
I sat down and a tingly feeling krept into my limbs. My hands felt numb and I couldn’t feel my feet. The tingly feeling continued and Charlie told me,” Stay here.” He turned and hurried owards a grassy hut. In a few minutes he came out with an old woman. Her silver hair was held back with a clasp and she wore a velvet dress.
“Athena,” Charlie said,” This is Horlanda our Camp Magician.”
I remembered that she was the one who had mentored Julie and I was not sure she was going to be one of my favorite people.
“Athena,” Horlanda greeted me in a cold voice.
I didn’t want to speek to her, but I for myself to mutter,” Hi.”
“So you want your little pet?” her voice was sarcastic and I didn’t like it.
“Yes, ma’m” I murmered.
“Very well,” she growled,” I might as well.”
She began to wave her hand and then suddenly she cried,” Undera Wleta Breatheri Dogla.”
I was confused. Was this old lady going to put me under another spell?
Apperently that wasn’t the plan. As Horlanda finished her babling, I felt a tingling. The air seemed to shimmer. Then in my lap a golden form shimmer. Then became solid. A dog with shining, golden fur lay in my lap. Its head was on its paws and its eyes are closed.
“Oh!” I cried.
“Ahh,” Charlie said,” Your dog! All you have to do is name him.”
“Ya,” I said,” I’ll think of one soon.”
“Good.” Charlie said,” You should rest now.”
He was right. The sun was behind the tall mountains and only slivers light cast light across the camp.
“Come,” Charlie called. He lead me to a cabin with each was painted differently. One wall had plats on the walls. On another was painted flames. On the third was thunder bolts. On the last was swirling blue paint that resembled the sea. The roof was painted as the sky.
Charlie opened the door and inside I saw that Annabeth, Tancred, and Nelly were all getting ready for bed. There were buck beds and regular beds.
“Athena1″ Annabeth cried,” Come here. We have your bunk ready.”
To be Continued….
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Love - July 16, 2010 by
Madi
Love is Kind
Love is crule
Love is devine
Love is scary
Love is truthful
Love is Lies
Love is comforting
Love socaial
Love is lonley
Love is….Love is….What ever you want it to be
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Drama,Death,Camp - July 16, 2010 by
Madi
“So what your telling me Lauren isn’t dead?How she committed suicide!” “Well…” Her voice still echoed through my ear drums pounding hard. “She faked it.She never killed herself.And now shes traveling.” “To hide from the cops…?” “No…looking for you.”I froze.Shes looking for me!?Oh no. “We got to go!” I screamed and tried to run out the door but she stopped me.”No!We have to kill her!” “Hey how can you touch me if you I can’t even feel you?” “NOT NOW!” she yelled “We need to make a plan!” “Ok fine we will make a plan.”I said calmly “Ok!Thank you!”Madi said with a face like “finely you agree with me!” “ok I got a plan.” I said “you do!Great what is it?” “RUUUUUUUUUUUNNN!” I scream as loud as I could and I ran while she was tying to get her hearing back.
A little while latter I found myself lost.Lost in time….
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