Month: May 2009

I’ve been bombarded. please comment your vote:

Should Ashes of a lost world continue?

A: YES

B: NO

C: NO BUT GIVE AWAY THE ENDING

chapter 3 A bemusement of two opposites
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Ryo (talking to mei): Io get up! What happened? why are you bleeding?
Mei: Wait? Io–Who– I’m not– My name’s Mei!
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Ryo: How did you get hurt? Did you hit your head?
Mei: Huh, no!
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Ryo: Do you have a fever?
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Mei: I’m fine!
Ryo: I’ll believe that if you pull a dead rat from your shirt!
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Mei: Please, you have the wrong girl, my name is Suzuki Mei
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Ryo: You are absolutely sure your name is not Iotatsu?
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Mei: Positive!
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(Ryo slings Mei over her sholder)
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(little girl squeals and runs at ryo)
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Ryo: little sister, get father, Io is hurt badly!
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little girl: Yes, older sister Ryo
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old man: she’s all patched up but the bleeding is incessant.
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ryo: will she live?
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man: yes, but she needs to to heal a while.
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ryo: Sorry, Io, no hunting for a while. Stay here and stay safe.

We left off with a missing child and a scared family…

Lucy slowy opened her sea blue eyes.   “Where am I?” she yelled. “Careful.You’ll wake up Izzy, our cat. And she scratches hard,” whispered a blonde haired girl, bending over Lucy in curiosity. “Who- who- who are you?” Lucy screamed. “Quiet. I’m Katie. I live here,” the girl replied. Lucy got up and… fell back down again.”Help me out of here,” Lucy said. “Help me out of here and I won’t bother you. Where am I?” “You’re in Dream Home Dollhouse,” Kaite answered. “Come on.” Katie’s house had orange walls and clean, yellow window panes. It was as if it was so clean, it was creepy.  Katie navigated Lucy around hallways full of clean white doors and perfectly straight pictures.”This is Mom and Dad’s room. If they find out I brought you here, they’ll ground me until the end of time,” Katie warned. Meanwhile, back in Lucy’s house, relatives where panicking. Lucy’s genius cousin, Ruth, was calculating the outcomes. “Okay, so if the median of the possibilities is… but the quartiles don’t match the angles… it just doesn’t compute! The possibilities don’t match anything logical!” Ruth calculated. “She couldn’t have been far. Maybe she’s in my sister’s room. I can’t tell. I need a cup of coffee,” replied Aunt Becka.” Wait! Listen! Can you hear that?” asked Lucy’s mom. “Yeah! It sounds like voices! Coming from the dollhouse! It’s saying, ‘Help me! It’s Lucy! I’m trapped in my dollhouse…’ Lucy! The dollhouse is on the left. Let’s investigate!” Ruth announced. The same cloud filled the room. It pushed everyone away. But when it cleared, Ruth, instead, was gone.

To be continued…

Naticca is the other girl in the dorm she has neon pink hair and bright hazel eyes. She’s really short.I walked into the common room, which is far too girly in my opinion thanks to Alex and Naticca, and flopped down on the couch. I was tired from my seemingly endless classes and track practice.
I was also really hungry from track. I wonder if we have any food… I couldn’t find any so I had to dip into my stash of chocolate cookies.I ended up eating all of them. Oh, well. I’ll have to get more later. Then I needed milk because the Oreo is milk’s favorite cookie. I got up and walked to the refrigerator. America is making me fat. I’m originally from Germany I moved here when I was 10. My American words and grammar still need a little work. According to Alex a lot of work. She teases me about that much, but I don’t really mind she’s probably my best friend. I think putting up with me through the months… years has earned her the right to do that.Alex was the one… first person I met here my own age, and my first friend.
We lucked out in the way we got accepted to the same college and have the same dorm.  Her exact words were, “Co-ed, sweet.” I couldn’t help feel… chagrin, at her words. Her head is often in the sewer, gutter.She has long brown hair and matching brown eyes. She’s up to about my collarbone, which actually makes her tall. Tam is the last guy in our dorm he’s almost as tall as me, I’m the tallest.. He has black hair with one red streak. His eyes are bright green.Anyways, when I open the refrigerator, I can’t find the milk carton. Which is weird because we have a rule that if you drink the last of the milk you have to buy more. Now I’m wondering who broke the rule and didn’t but milk.
This is turning into quite a mystery. If this is the mystery I guess I’m the detective.I crouched down and started crawling toward the girl’s room. I was humming the mission impossible theme to myself.Just as I was closing in on the door someone opened it, hitting me in the face.  Ouch! Alex was then standing over me.“You ok?” She asked.“Yeah.” I blushed. How am I going to explain this? “Did you drink the last of the milk?”“No.”“Did Nat?” Nat is out nickname for Naticca.“No.”We just stood/lay there for a second.“You still want to check our room, don’t you?“That would be prudent.”“Your English is still weird.”“Yeah I know.” And with that Alex left. I couldn’t help myself, I started humming the mission impossible theme song again. Aha! There was a glass of milk on Alex’s desk. I took another step and looked deep into the glass. The milk was dry. She definitely didn’t drink this today, and I know there was milk in the fridge yesterday so it couldn’t have been Alex.
One down two to go.I looked around for Nat. She was deeply asleep on her bed. She has most of her classes at night though so she mostly sleeps in the day. There was no incriminating evidence on her half of the room. So I decided I would investigate Tam before I came back to Nat.I walked into our room like I normally would. I knew Tam wouldn’t be there because I saw him leave on my way in, so now I can investigate with out him looking over my shoulder.I looked high and low in our room and couldn’t find anything out of the ordinary. Then my eyes chanced upon a large bowl. Ok well not really that big, like a regular bowl. I looked into that to find nothing but, the remains of this morning’s CEREAL! Aha, so it was him!I waited until Tam got home to confront him. He then agreed to buy more milk.
I knew he would I just wanted to have a little fun, so I went with him. It really wasn’t a great mystery but, I bet next time my detectiveness is needed it will be a really awesome story. 

“Wow!” exclaimed Lucy. “That’s huge!” The box, towering over her like Mount Everest, contained something that could change the course of the earth, the universe, even. She tore apart the hot pink wrapping paper like a ravenous beast, until a plain, brown, cardboard box was unveiled. “Let me help you with that, dear,” insisted Lucy’s aunt, Becka, as she pryed apart the cardboard with her sharp, well-manicured nails. ” Its a, a, a dollhouse! With opening windows, running water, actual heating ovens-” Lucy began.  “Whoa, whoa, whoa. Who said anything about heating ovens? And running water? How many batteries does this hot cake take?” asked Lucy’s mother. ” I don’t know,” replied Lucy. “But this thing is awesome! Right? Right?” Suddenly, a cloud of black dust filled the room. A scream echoed.  And Lucy was nowhere to be found.

To be continued…

Chapter 1: Mei and the Fang Necklace:
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My name is Suzuki Mei, my family has a long history filled with legends and myths and I was never one to believe in any of it… At least until today.
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My family’s history is so long we own an entire museum!
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My mother and I take turns giving tours, but today I just wanted a break…Aparently, so did she.
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Mei: Mom! You said I could have the day off!
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Mei: You always do this at the last minute. I haven’t had a day off in two weeks!
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Mom: I’ll work today but tomorrow I get the day off!
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mei: Thanks, your the best!
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(walks aimlessly around museum)
Mei: I have the day off, now what to DO?
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(holds vase)
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(drops vase)
CRASH!!!
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(stares at painting)
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(immitates painting)
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(stares at a diarama)
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(grabs doll from diarama)
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(breaks doll’s arm off)
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(walks down hall)
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(sees a fang necklace hanging on the wall)
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Mei (thinking): It’s beautiful…
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mei (thinking): Mom wouldn’t mind if I tried it on…
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(necklace glows around mei’s neck)
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mei (thinking): It’s…glowing!?
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POOF!
(cloud of smoke appears)

Chapter 2: The Suzuki Dragon Hunters
500 years earlier
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Ryo: Do you ever wonder where you were when you were when you born?
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Iotatsu: What do you mean?
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Ryo: You were adpoted.
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ryo: we found you outside a dragon’s den
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io shoots arrow through a scarecrows head)
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io: how old was I?
ryo: five
io: you?
ryo: ten
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(io shoots arrow)
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io: what became of the dragon?
ryo: the dragons were slayed.
(io shoots another arrow)
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io: i’m out of arrows… I’ll take a nap.
ryo (giggles): sleep with your eyes open!
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(io on one side of tree asleep, cloud of dust appears on otherside)

Sorry NO MORE “ASHES OF A LOST WORLD”

Starting now, I will be writng:

Jaaku No Tono (Lord of the wicked)

“Ah, girls, we’ve interveiewed you all and…” The woman began.

Ash’s heart leaped she could feel it in her throat. There was no way she would want her. She has brown hair, gray eyes, and has nothing special about her whatsoever.

“We’ve decided…” Ash held her eyes shut tight.

“ALL OF YOU!”

Aquamarine fainted. Breeze laughed uncontrollably. Phoenix ran right up to the man and hugged him tightly. Ash opened her eyes and cried through her blind eyes. But of course Raven never showed emotions she thanked them and began picking up her things.

“BOYS!” four boys walked in the room at the man’s command. “Grey and Jacob get the luggage. Cole get Aquamarine, she’s on the floor. Uh, Stone help Ash, she’s blind she may need this attention until we get her a seeing- eye dog.”

“She’s blind?” Stone asked.

“I’m not deff. I can hear you. And I’m not helpless either. She said, on the way out and walked into the door.

Marian eyes fluttered open. She sat up and looked around. Surrounding her was complete darkness. She felt something bump against her back. Marian spun around. It was Zack!! “Hey, Zack, do  you know where Marita is and the others are?” Zack waged his tail and trotted a few feet away. Marian followed him and found Sandy asleep on the ground. She awoke her sister and they woke Marita and Chelsy. The girls huddled in a corner and looked around. They were lost.

The Assassin took out two light-sabers. They both started fighting. At last the Assassin dropped her light-saber. Master Yoda used the force to take the light-saber. The Assassin threw a bomb. Yoda let go of the weapons. The Assassin caught them, then in a jiffy she ran away . “Coward the dark side is “, said Master Yoda. Then he flew away. But while he was flying in hyperspace he bumped into some thing.

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The next morning Sandy and Zack were first to wake up. She woke her sisters and the girls and their dog tip-toed down the stairs to the first floor. The tile floor was chilly beneath their bare feet. Quickly, Sandy found the hidden door. “Come on,” Chelsy urged.
Sandy slowly opened the small door, the girls peered in the door. A series of small steps receded into drakness. Suddenly there was a big force that sucked all the girls and their dog into darkness…

 Hi I am a 8 year old girl named Monica Jade Griffin. I cannot read or write so I got a older richer person to write it for me. On to the story….. Sara and I woke-up that morning not Knowing where we were and what we will have to do. I was 8,my little sister,Sara,was 5,and our big sister,Ana Lee,was 13. Our mother ran off with someone when Sara was 3 and our father, well we do not know him. We have different fathers. Ana has been taking care of Sara and I for the last 2 years. We do not get to go to school like normal kids.Ana tried to teach us but, she does not know every much her neither. It is slacking every day on food items. Sometimes Ana and I go with out food so Sara can have a good meal for once. Ana thinks momma will come back and love us again but, of she loved us she would be here not with him. Mamie dislikes us because of momma. She says we are just like her and will not be a part of this family. Oh,did i tell you about the farms that we had. We use to have farms with healthy foods, but not any more they have destroyed them.

Now for the part that the world should be.

Hi I am a 8 year old girl named Monica Jade Griffin. I can read and write, so i will be writing this myself. 

and then she swam with the spirit man to a bloody island and she slept there but later in the night a bloody bone man came up and jumped on her was screaming but she had a broken bone from the bon man

Ma Oh  My Ma

The softness of your voice

The calmness of your presence

Warmth of your arms

Makes me feel safe and sound

My Mom is great

My Mom does every thing for me

I do appreciate

She is the best Mom

You make me feel good when I see you!

If I could give anything to you , I would give you: EVERYTHING!

Mother’s day is a day we appreciate our Mothers for all they do

 A day when do things for her

Instead of making her work

Let her rest

For Mother’s Day is a  day to appreciate our mothers

The house was four stories high. The girls helped their foster mom get all the packing boxes and furniture in the house then the girls and their dog went exploring. “Hey, you guys come look at this,” called Sandy. The sisters looked at what Sandy was pointing at. It was a small door. The girls could barley see it. “Let’s go in,” said Marian. “Let’s wait until tomorrow,”said Marita. The four girls and their dog were so tired that they didn’t object.

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I love to play the Guitar

It makes a lovely sound

It gives me a wonderful feeling

The most pleasant of all