Month: August 2009

The building was large and was filled with people who wore fine clothes. There were chandeliers that hung from the ceiling. Their light was bright and filled the room with a happy atmosphere. Alyss held a tray as she walked around offering everyone a drink. She was the slave of Arotosis Macendor {Lady Mquendor}. The Lady had hosted this party to honor her 23 birthday. She was a lady wearing a green moss colored dress. Alyss was a tall girl. She was 13 years old and had long blond hair and wore a simple white dress.

She walked around handing everyone a drink when she bumped into a women carrying a glass. As she bumped into her she spilled the tray and the lady spilled her drink all over her front! “Oh! I’m I’m so so sorry!” Alyss cried.  She was scared that Lady Mquendor would beat her for the spill. “It’s okay dear,”the lady replied sweetly. She muttered something under her breath and the spill vanished and the spilled drinks vanished the glasses were filled once more. “So are you angry,Miss?” Alyss asked hesitently. She was wary of the lady now that she had just seen her powers. Alyss wasn’t surpriesd that the lady could do what she just did. Witches were well heard of in the kingdom of Greandom.  Suddenly the lady frowned and said,”I must talk to your mistress. There is something she needs to know.”

The rain dropped heavily out of the sky. I looked around the white docks of Wateranla. The building on the dock had bright white lights and looked welcoming. We walked to the doors and slowly Grandor pushed open the door. It swung open and inside there was a hall way that lead to a large room. “Do you think we should go in?”I asked still cradling Ramble. “Yes.”Grandor said firmly. Convity looked hesitant,”I think something’s wrong.” Grandor turned on her and snapped,”What could be wrong?” “Well for one thing there are no guards. No Wentar would leave the door unlocked let alone unguarded.”Convity explained calmly. “Oh,”Grandor said bluntly. I slowly took a step forward and then when nothing happened I stepped into the hall way and motioned for my friends to follow. They stepped in after me. I walked to the room across the hall and saw a bookcase in the corner and saw that whoever lived in this building had left in a hurry. There were books on the floor and pieces of paper. A book bound in leather was closed on the table. I walked over to it and Convity and Grandor went off to explore the rest of the building. Ramble jumped out of my arms and Strolled over to a small bundle of blankets. He curled up in a ball and fell asleep. I walked over to table and opened the book. Instantly a face appeared. a hologram. It was a face of a Wentar. White and thin it spoke in a thin voice,”Today’s report is not as urgent as yesterday’s. I think the Andorians have canceled trying to take over our planet. I hope I’m right. I… What! Hey! Who..Ahhh!!!!” The hologram went out. What I saw was terrible. The Wentar had been ambushed by the same Andorian we had confronted in our school. That same time Convity came in with Grandor”We didn’t find anything. We looked everywhere.” I must have let my fear show because Grandor poked Convity in her ribs and said quietly,”I think Dirsaly has something to show us.” They sat down next to us and I opened the book again.

Convity had been horrified and Grandor had been simply furious. “Why are they disturbing the peace of the galaxy with their violence!?” he boomed on the top of his lungs.

There was no light the next morning like there was no light everyday on the planet of  Wateranla.  The planet was dark as night. The only thing that lightened the planet enough so that you could see was the white lights of the buildings. We were standing on the docks and Ramble was trying to catch us some breakfast with his long tail. He had caught one Anshaly fish, Hantel Trout,and a small Frantle Salmon. We ate our fish and cooked it in one of the ships. I sat at the controls and Ramble sat in the seat next to me. Convity smiled encouragingly to me and Grandor gave me a thumbs up. I smiled and started and set the coordinates to Andoria.

I have a beak.

My back feet has finns.

My front feet has claws.

What am I?

Write the anwser in a  comment.

I stared at the man and asked,”What?” Convity seemed confused. Gondor stared open mouthed at the man. “How-how did you know?”Convity asked,”No one knows except the the Principal of this Senator School.”  “Oh,we know all right. We have known for years and we have been trying to find a way to get into this school and stop this horrible proses.” Then as if he had just come out of a daydream he grabbed my arms and called out something in Andorian. Two more Andorians came and each grabbed Convity and Grandor’s arms. We were bustled out of the huge school doors and outside there was a huge Andorian ship. There were a lot of Andorians outside the ship. There were also Andorians pushing students into the ship. “Get in,”the man behind me growled.

The ship was big and all of it except the pilot’s room was filled with cells. I was stuck in a cell next to Frizzle. It was bad enough to be stuck in a cell but Frizzle made the experience worse. I examined the the lock on the the cell door. It was a simple lock. I fished out in my pocket for my lock pick. I had practiced to pick locks when I had locked myself in my room and the room cleaner had picked the lock and let me out. I picked the lock and heard a soft click and the door swung open without a sound. I slipped out and looked around the room and saw that there were a billion cells that contained another student. I saw that siting on a table was a Drancula Pistol. I picked it up and slowly walked into the pilot room. The pilot had landed on an other planet. He was torturing  a small Samilia. A Samilia was a animal that had a body of an cat and a face of and a cat but it has large ears and a tail of a lion. It was blue. I aimed the Pistol at the man and fired. He dropped dead and I ran out of the room to the other cells. I picked very lock and we spilled out of the door. I looked around the planet. We were on a dock of a water filled planet called Wateranla. There were oceans across the planet with no land. The Wentars had built white buildings . It was raining and as soon as we stepped out of the ship we were drenched with a down pour of cold rain. The students ran over to some ships and the students who knew how to fly drove ships. The students piled onto the ship and I was about to follow when I felt a hand on my shoulder. I tuned and saw Grandor standing there with a grim expression on his face. “Please help me find Landor,”he said,”He wasn’t on the ship and I think they took him someplace.”Convity joined us. “What’s going on?”  “Grandor wants us to help him find Landor,” I told her.

We agreed and soon the ship had flown away. We were trying to find shelter for the night. I felt something brush against my legs. I looked down. It was the Samilia. I picked it up and told Convity and Grondor. “I’m going to keep him. He can help us. I’ll name him Ramble.”

  The castle towered over Zuhrah’s head like the tallest sand dune the dessert. The huge doors stood wide open and a steady stream of people were all trying to make their way inside. As Zuhrah got closer to the door she picked up Suha  so that she wouldn’t get trampled or lost or both. She reached the door and the palace guard stopped her. “No pets allowed! Take that thing out of here!” “B-but I never go anywhere without her,”Zahrah pouted. Sighing,the guard hurried to get Zahrah inside so he said,”Go on! You can take her but only this once.” She hurried in and gasped.

  The great hall was huge. There were 12 long tables and they were all piled up with food. There were more food here than Zahrah had ever seen. Suha was set down and liked her lips. Suddenly there was a man saying,” Everyone make your way to the ballroom so that we can celebrate the wedding before we eat!” Everyone made their way to the room. The ball room had a high ceiling and there were chandeliers hanging from the roof high above. Suddenly,just as Zahrah had begun to get used to the room,the prince walked into the ball room.

                            Prolouge

          The bazaar of Bagdad was bustling with people of all shapes and sizes. Bagdad’s market place was the most crowded place in all of Bagdad. Blacksmiths,fruit sellers,jewelers,and more were selling their goods to people that were passing. Zuhrah was watching all the comision from an abandoned house. She had a huge window the size of a elephant. She sat down and looked at the piece of bread she had snatched from the baker. She picked one up and was about to eat when she caught sight of something slip behind the moth eaten curtains. Zuhrah put down the piece of bread and slowly pulled the curtain aside. There cowering in a corner was a small tiger cub the size of a few month old kitten. She slowly reached forward and the tiger limped away. She saw the kitten was staying off it’s left paw.She looked back at the bread. I took off a small piece and held it out to the tiger. It crept to the bread and then the bread was gone.Zuhrah picked the tiger up and told it in a soothing tone,”Shh.. Don’t worry. I’ll take care of you. You won’t be alone any more. And the tiger never left Zuhrah.

  Suha put her paw on the fruit sellers stall. “Get out of here!”the fruit seller said to the medium size tiger,”Get’ before I skin you alive,you thieving tiger!” While the man tried to get the tiger away Zuhrah popped up behind him and grabbed a smaller watermelon. She sneaked up to the abandoned house. Zahra seeing her mistress leave successfully she left the fruit seller and made her way to the abandoned house,too. “Mmmm..,”Zuhrah moaned as she and Suha ate their stolen melon. After finishing Zuhrah got up an climbed down from the window and looked around the bazar, waiting for Suha to join her. As the tiger came to her a booming voice announced,”Make way! Make Way for the king of Bagdad!” A huge elephant came parading through the path the people had made for the king. On top of the elephant there was a saddle and there sitting on top of the elephant was a short stubby man wearing a turban and royal robe. A huge umbrella was stuck to the saddle to prevent the sun from making the king as hot as the people in the bazaar,who were sweating and sticky from the suns harmful rays. The elephant came to a halt as the king said in a sleepy voice, “People of Bagdad! My son,Prince Ali is getting married tomorrow night! Everyone in the village near the castle is invited. Also anyone here is aloud too!”  

   That night Zuhrah was wondering whether she should go. “I want to go,Suha.” Suha looked as if to say,”Are you going to take me?” “Don’t worry,Suha! I’m sure they wouldn’t mind. Anyway I don’t have anything to wear to the party.” Suha dashed away. Zuhrah sighed. She looked out the window at the starry sky. The bazaar was deserted and the stalls were closed. Suha reappeared clutching a package in her mouth. She dropped it in Zuhrah lap. She opened it and gasped. Inside was a purple sari that shimmered in the moonlight. Suha meowed and seemed to say,”It is for you. You can wear that.”

  The next morning Zahrah  woke early when the sun was peeking over the distant sand dunes. Zharah put on the sari and soon she and Suha were on their way to the castle.

 We ended up sleeping in the huge security room. We slept in sleeping bags and we made sure that the door were bolted with iron bars. I slept lightly. I woke 3 times. One time I heard Convity having a nightmare. I woke up to the sound of shuffling bodies. I opened my eyes and light streamed into my eyes. I had to blink and then I got of the sleeping bag and stood up. The doors were open and students were streaming out. I walked over to Convity and Grandor. They were talking to a security guard. “….Are you sure it’s safe to continue our studies?” Grandor was asking. “Yes,young man,now look. Your friend is coming. He turned to look in my direction and the guard dashes away. “Hey,guys!”I said trying to be cheerful as possible. “Hey.”Grandor and Convity said bluntly. We walked out side and saw that there was no one out side. “Where is everyone?!” Convity asked with panic in her voice.”Where they belong,”said a voice behind us. We whirled around we were face to face with a Adorian. “Well,well,”he said with a cruel smirk,”We have finally got all of you to-be-politician students.” “Why are you invading our school?!”I asked as I tried to not let my voice tremble. “Isn’t it obvios? You kids are dumer than I thought. We don’t want you to be Senators.We don’t want you controlling our planets.”

The waves splashed against the shore and I was getting soaked. I stared up at the stray night. I was an sea otter and I loved sitting on my rock at night and counting the stars. I was counting the 50th when I caught a glimpse of something of something that looked like a star in one of the tide-pools. I slid off my rock and swam to the thing. I reached it and gasped. It was a yellow star. I grabbed it with my fury paw and returned to my rock. “No! Please put me back in the water,”squeaked a small voice. I looked around. I wondered who had spoken since everyone knows stars can’t speak. “Put me back!” The star wiggled in my paw. I turned it over and saw a face peering back at me. “Pu me down!” It said. “Did you fall out of the sky?”I asked. “NO! I live in the see! I’m a star fish.” “Oh. Do they reflect in the sky?” I asked inquisitively. “NO! I’m gonna die if you don’t put me back.” I put the star fish in the tide pool. I know now that I should never take out a star fish. They will be very rude.

My door opened and my mother stood there framed in the door way.

She told me like always that everything would be okay, But it wasn’t it just wasn’t without Buddy. Everything was better when Dad was around but too bad he was long gone. He was my baseball coach along time ago and a darn good one at that. I was like the real meaning of Daddy’s girl but now I’m just little old Emma Jenheart from down the street. It’s hard being the only girl who likes to play baseball it’s just not right that Buddy has to leave too. My Dad used to be my favorite family member the one who understood me. He was the one who called me Emmy my favorite nickname, now the only person who calls me that now is my neighbor Tommy. I may be fourteen but I have the heart of a kindergardener.

I ran outside and knocked on Tommy’s door. Tommy’s mom answered and Tommy walked right outside beside me. “Tommy, I need a favor”, I said in the voice Mom used to use on Dad. “Yeah, Emmy”? He asked. “Can you help me find Buddy? He ranaway and Mom doesn’t have the gas to go looking for her in the old Cab”, I said quietly. Tommy nodded and we ran towards the place Buddy, Tommy, and I used to play as todlers. When we got there I was amazed to find Buddy under the shed by the graveyard. “Here, boy. Come here, Buddy”, I said making motions. Buddy ran over to me and licked my toes because I was barefoot. “Buddy! Hey Pal”, Tommy laughed rubbing behind Buddy’s ears. “Thanks for helping, Tommy”, I said quietly. Tommy looked over at me then asked, “Have you been crying”? I sniffed and nodded. “Buddy was a gift from my Dad. He was the last thing my Dad ever gave me before…before…the accident”, I sniffed. Tommy nodded and I laughed, “Dad always called me his Lost Dog because I was always here at the shed”. Tommy laughed and gave me a smile. “I remember, Emmy just know forever you’ll be my Lost Dog”, Tommy laughed. “That was really cheesy”, I laughed. “I know that’s why I said it, Emmy”, He laughed.

And I guess we lived happily ever after……..

The sun beat down on us as we put up signs and worried about Buddy. Zack came to me and said,” All done, Emma.” I sighed and said,” I ran out of signs too. We walked back to our house. Mum was sitting on the couch reading Tom Sawyer. “How did it go?” We looked up and saw Jake, our older brother looking down at us. “Okay,” I said bitterly,” It might have gone better if you had agreed to help!” Just then the phone rang. Mum picked it up. “Hello? Yes…okay…Good.” She hung up and I blurted the questions that burned on my tongue,” Is it about Buddy? Did they find our dog!??” Mum looked at me in surprise then it softened,” No, dear. That was Mrs. Jones from the book club.” I ran from the living room to my room and slammed the door. I fell on my bed and sobbed. I missed Buddy. He would come up to my and lick away any tears that were on my face. I got Buddy on my tenth birthday and he was my puppy but he loved everyone and everyone loved him. Now he was gone! I had woken that morning and went down to the kitchen to let him out and give him his breakfast like I did every morning. But when I got there the door was open and Buddy was gone.

   “This is so booring!”I grumbled to Convity. “Your right, I think I’m going to fall asleep if the computer let’s us take a break!” Convity answered me.  I was a human but there were like twenty kids that were Dianleses or Grantes and even Fortoses. There were much more,too. Convity was a Lataski. She had blue pale skin and odd almond shaped eyes. Her eyes were an aqua blue and often turned baby blue when she was bored. Suddenly my computer said in a robotic voice,”You are dismissed for 30 minutes.” I gave a short sigh of relief. The class got up from their domes and out to the playground. I walked out and looked around. Cars and scooters zoomed passed on the section that were made for vehicles. Convity and I stood next to the sliding elevator. We went up and up and up and finally the door opened. We walked out to our dorm. Convity and I were room mates. We were ready for a movie. We had just settled down when we heard voices in the hallway. I walked over to the door and peeked out. Two Adorians were standing in the hallway and they were carrying Razer Sharp pistol Blasters. I gulped. Pistols could kill anyone it touched and they were forbidden at this school. I crep to the t.v and turned it off. “There are two men with Pistols. They’re right out side our hallway.” I whispered. Convity gasped and her aqua eyes grew a bright shade of aqua.  Suddenly we heard someone trying to force the door open. We knew we didn’t have much time. Luckily we were prepared for a emergency. We escaped through a emergency elevator and it zipped down to the security room. When we entered we found the security was packed. “Drisaly! “someone called my name. I looked toward the voice. It was Frizzel a human but she was  a big snob. She was probably trying to tell me that I had gotten hear late and was a big loser. I ignored her and Convity and I walked over to Grandor a Samillian. “Hello,guys,”he said with a small smile. We smiled back and Grandor sighed heavily. “Lancord didn’t make it. The men grabed him before he could get into the elevator,”then he said so quietly that I almost didn’t hear him,”I miss my brother a lot.” He turned toward us I saw that his eyes were filling with tears his green skin was a darker shade of green. “I hate them!”he blurted. “Hate is not the way of the students here,”Convity reminded him. “I don’t care. They have my brother,”he said angrily.

Hello. This is to to all the people who were in A GAME #1, or anyone who wants to participate

The first game was not organized and didn’t work very well. Ive decided to do a redo of it in a different way. Here’s how it will work:

Person 1 writes there part as the first comment. Then

person 2 will write there part as the second comment.

Below is an example;

comment#1; The boy road his bike up the hill.

comment#2; The boy road his bike down the hill.

This will be a never-ending story.

After a week or so, posts disappear. If you click

on “coolblue99″ all the stories I’ve written on this site

will pop up. Also, I haven’t posted a “blind William”

story in a while. Ive been doing research for the story,

and I am almost done.

The mist stalks

on silent wolf feet

it wanders, waiting,

to engulf a city in its wings.

It watches with

unblinking eyes,

and sulks off.

Hey Kids, The Results are in. You have chosen a Winner…

Sydney is the ” Writer of the Month” !!

We at the kidwritersclub Congratulate Sydney for being  an amazing writer and for winning the Precious “Writer of the Month” Title. so far Sydney has posted 42 stories and poems at kidwritersclub.com

The second I saw him was the moment I knew,

Somehow someway he was connected to you,

I felt his sadness his hurt and his pain I wanted to help him and forget my shame,

I didn’t even know him but I loved him so,

Then I knew he knew because he smiled as if in a show.

  I walked right past him. He stared back at me and I said, “Do I know you”? The teenage boy smiled and said, “No, Rex I know you”. I raised an eyebrow and said, “Who are you”? “Just call me Zone X”, The boy said. I rolled my eyes and kept walking not even feeling the ground beneath me as if I were flying. “I can help you”, He said in his scary voice. “I don’t need help maybe you should get some”, I said still walking. “I know what you feel, Rex. I can hear your thoughts, feel what you’re feeling, and I know every moment you’ve ever lived”, Zone said softly. “Why are you following me”? I almost screamed. “Rex, Take my hand maybe reality would do you some good”, Zone said instantly infront of me.  I don’t know why but I took his hand even though I didn’t trust this guy.  I woke up in a hospital bed.  It seemed like I was sick or injured cause my best friend Tim was standing over me wiping his eyes so I wouldn’t see he’d been crying. “Rex, Are you okay? How do you feel”? He asked. “Tim, I feel weird. What’s going on? Why am I in here”? I asked. “On the way to the concert we got in a wreck and you passed out and had really bad gashes on your legs and back. So they said to keep you here for like a day or two. It’s been a week you went into a coma for while you just came out”, Timsaid quickly. I nodded and said,” Okay then why don’t I remeber”? “You passed out before the wreck”, Tim said holding my hand. I took the IV out of my arm and saw I was still wearing my usual shorts and cami. I got out of the hosiptal bed and walked outside quickly. “I told your Mom we were out camping with my Dad”, Tim said with a smile.  I laughed and we went over to his car. He drove me to my house and I ran inside quickly feeling alittle dizzy. When I got up to my room I sat down on my bed with a loud clang. ”Hello, Rex”, Somebody said beside me. I looked to my right and nobody was there. I looked to my left and nobody was there. There was a bright light and the teenage boy from my dream materialized infront of me. I passed out and when I woke up I was in a metal room. The boy from my dreams leaned over me and I felt really uncomfortable. “What? Who…How….Where…Am I”? I asked. “You’re at my house. Somewhere secret, You are the only one able to enter it through dreams and reality. My name is Zone X and I am at your service, Rex”, He said quickly. I looked up at the metal ceiling and said, “What is this place”? “It’s the place of dreams. The place we can only invade. It’s my home as much as it is yours. Rex, Listen to me. You are not human! You are one of us, We are the magical ones”, Zone said touching my forehead. I was suddenly full of knowledge and I saw multiple slide shows in my head. I nodded and stood up to see a huge portal in front of me. I relaxed and said, “Close”. The portal closed as ordered and I felt power surge through my veins like adrenaline. “Zone, what is my new name”? I asked. “Zepheria”, He said softly. “Why are you so afraid”? I asked smelling fear in the air. “They are here”, Zone whispered. “Who”? I asked. “They are called Ailesetresheimans they are fire birds who turn into humans…Very dangerous humans”, Zone said his voice shaking. “I’m Sorry I brought you here”, Zone added. He made another portal and pushed me in. When I looked back my room was empty and alone. “ZONE”! I yelled scared. Nobody answered.     TOO BE CONTINUED……                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         

      Thunder boomed outside and lightning lit up my room. I looked at my clock and saw that it was 12:00. My room lit up and I heard my door open. Mum stood in the door way. “What are you doing, Mum?” I asked. “I wanted to check if you would let your kitten sleep with you.” “Umm…sure,”I agreed hesitantly. She handed me a tremblingbundle of fur. The kitten was so scared of the thunder and lightning that she was like an massage chair. Sleeping next to her was like sleeping next to a volcano that was about erupt.

    The sun streamed through the crack in the shades. Mum was shaking my shoulder gently. “Wake up. We over slept.” I got dressed and quickly ate my toast. I waited at the bus stop and brush my hair. I hadn’t had time to take a shower so I felt disheveled. The yellow bus stopped in front of the stop and I climbed on board. I plunkecd myself next to Danna and sighed. I was sure that today would be horrible.

I possess knowledge,

I know an entire language, maybe two,

I didn’t go to college,

To know, read me you should do.