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The Band!{Part 1} - December 29, 2009 by raqshan

I took in a deep breath. I could here the crowd crying in a corus,”Ashely!! Ashley!!” I looked over at Kile, my song writer and he nodded. I ran out onto the stage and up to the head microphone and cried,”Thanks for coming! Tonight we’re gonna sing our new song “Wave”!”

At the end I took a jumping bow. “Peace!”I cried as I ran off stage. Kile,Marissa,and the band{Sofie,Brian,and Robin} were standing with huge smiles on their face. “We did it!”I cried, barely able to contain my excitement. The Crazy Music had not messed up! I sighed and slumped in my chair. Marissa grinned. Being 13 and older than us she felt as if the band would always mess up and play horrible. Kile sat in a chair next to me. “Ashley,I’ve thought of another song,”he told me. Kile was creative and great with words, that’s one of the reasons he was the song writer. “What?” I asked. “It’s called Paradise.” I nodded as he told me about it. “Wow!’ I exclaimed,”I think this will be your best song yet!”

Your probably wondering what all this humble jumble is about, right? Well, let me explain. I am the leader of the band called Crazy Music.  Sofie,Brian,and Robin play the music while I sing the songs. Kile,My best friend next to Sofie is the band’s Song writer. He writes the songs and I sing them. Marissa is Robin’s older sister and she thought we needed a manager to make sure we knew where we would be holding concerts and when the next band practice would be. The band nearly fell apart when Kile and Marissa got into an argument about who was better at making songs. we sorted it out and now the band is perfect.

To be continued…..

P.S. Please comment if you think the story is a good one and if I should keep writing! :D

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Going(Cameron’s point of view){Part 2} - December 29, 2009 by artsgurly983

“So. This is really our last… you know, moment together?” Hazel asked me for the 7TH TIME ALREADY. It seemed as if she thought my answer was going to change.

“Hazel, for the 7th time, you can’t change that I’m moving to Houston, Texas.” I said. But after I said it I sort of regretted it. The reason was because my tone was rude. I know that if I used that tone with my mom I would be in BIG trouble.

I glanced at Hazel. I knew that I had just hurt her. And just with my voice.

” Camry,” she cried getting louder with each word,”maybe I just want you to stay because I need you. You’re my only friend. But, maybe you need some time to think about what you have before you lose it!!!”

I understood how she felt. Out of the 5 years of us being best friends I had NEVER talked to her that way. I didn’t even know how to respond so I stood there. Motionless.  As if I were paralyzed from the waist down……..

All of a sudden she freaked out, pushed my suitcase over the side of the bed, started to cry and then slowly collapse down the side of my bed. I was VERY concerned. “I’m so sorry!” she yelled. I could tell her throat was tightening up.

“Hazel?…Hazel… Haze!!!” I said, smothered in guilt. She turned her head, I guess realizing I was really sorry.

“I’m going,” while I said this I felt like the worst boy alive “You can’t change it. I’m…I, I…I’m sorry.”

“Cameron. Cameron!!! It’s time to go to the airport!” a random voice screamed down from my kitchen, startling me. It was my mom. Uhhhhh, why now? I thought.

I began to say “Hazel, I gotta…” but I was too late. Hazel had already ran down the stairs, dashed through my kitchen, and rushed outside to my driveway where my mom was packing the car. I looked out my window and saw Hazel hand something to my mom. My mom knodded.

Hazel walked away head down, crunching leaves under her feet, crying.

Later on the plane towards Houston, Cameron’s mom handed him the mystery item. A tear rolled down his face.

The item was a BFFL clay sphere Hazel and Cameron had made in 3rd grade.

What else do you think the charm could have been? Post it as a comment.

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Pictures - December 29, 2009 by raqshan

         dragon     dpegasus      

parrots              giraffe

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Teenage Band:p.4 - December 29, 2009 by Sydney Bailey

That night I walked to Tanum’s house and rang the doorbell. He answered it and when he saw it was me he stepped outside. I stared up at him and then I collapsed holding him like he were my Dad and a ghost was after me. I couldn’t stop crying, he put me down on his pourch and hugged me tightly. I tried not to let the words spill until I was done crying and then I stopped slowly. He wiped the tears off my face and looked me in the eyes.

“What happened?” Tanum asked.

“I’m sorry,” I said trying to fight the tears.

“What happened?” He asked worried.

“Ki walked up to me in l-lunch and th-threatened me, he said he was gonna do something that would make me come back. He showed me a video and it showed-it showed…It showed-”, But the words wouldn’t come out.

“It showed what happened at camp didn’t it?” His voice was nothing more than a whisper.

“Y-Yes, and he said to meet him at the diner by my house when he calls. He wants to see you too, I’m sorry, Tanum, I’m so sorry,” I cried.

He looked at the time on his clock then said, “It’s okay, nothing’s gonna happen. I promise, it’ll work out in the end…If he does show the video then I’ll just have to tell my Dad I was a drunk. Look at me, Jesse! It’ll be okay, nobody’s gonna hurt you, not while I’m around.”

I held him close for a while then my phone started vibrating over and over. I opened it slowly and saw I just got a video message, but it as the video I knew it. I played it and felt me wanna cry again but before I could cry the phone rang again.

I wiped my tears again and pressed ‘Talk’, “Hello?”

“Hey,Hun, get my message?” He asked in that evil voice.

“Yeah, I got it…And?” I asked.

“Meet me at the diner now…And, Hun, You must be comfortable sitting there on Tanum’s lap crying like a little baby,” Ki laughed. Then the line went dead. I looked around and didn’t see a car in sight…But I knew I wouldn’t find anything…He knew me.

I looked at Tanum and he nodded. He pulled out his keys and we got in his car quickly, and then I looked over at him. He didnt start the ignition yet.

“Whatever happens, Jesse, We’ll handle this together,” Tanum smiled weakly. I nodded an we pulled out of the driveway slowly. A few minutes later we pulled into a parking space at the Diner and he took the keys out and put them in his pocket.

We walked in cautiously and saw him in the back corner of the Diner. When we sat by him he handed us a small menu, and gave me a wink.

“What do you want, Ki? We don’t have time for this,” Tanum said leaning toward Ki threatningly.

“What I mainly want is from Jesse.” He smiled that evil smile of his.

“W-What do you want from me”? I asked.

“Tell me you love me.” Ki said.

“Don’t Jesse,” Tanum said holding up a hand.

I stayed quiet then Ki leaned over toward me with a smirk. “Kiss me”, He said softly, “I know you still want to.”

“There’s no way in Hell,” I said grimacing at the effort of remembering that I hate him.

“My hand might just slip on the send button.” Ki said staring me down.

“Jesse, Don’t do it. He can just send it, what happened to it doesn’t really matter? Think about it.” Tanum said softly.

“It can be like it was before, and I can delete this video before anyone sees it. It can be our little secret, as long as you do what I say,” Ki laughed.

I nodded and looked over at Tanum who was looking at me shocked. “Jesse, you can’t seriously be falling for this again.”

I looked at Ki and said, “I’m not getting back together with you. You said only one kiss.”

Ki nodded and leaned closer, I quickly text Tanum what I was about to do and he pretended he was all mad still. I started kissing him but my hand edged toward the phone on the table right beside his arm. Once I got it I slid it under the table to Tanum and he pocketed it.  I pulled away slowly and he looked at me closely.

“This is goodbye, and I don’t think we’ll be talking for a very long time. Bye,” I smiled standing up. Tanum stood up and gave a weak half nauseous smile. We walked to his car but Ki caught up quickly and grabbed my arm.

“Don’t leave just yet,” Ki said tightening his grip.

“Let go of me,” I hissed.

“Stop being so defensive,” Ki said pressing me against  Tanum’s car.

“Get off me!” I yelled.

Tanum pulled Ki off me and said, “Touch her again and see how fast an ambuance comes your way.”

Ki nodded and Tanum backed off for a second. But then Ki pulled me toward him and whispered something rude into my ears.

I pushed him away and before Tanum could react I had tackled Ki and I couldn’t stop punching him.

“That’s for talking about my brother like he was a piece of dirt! That’s for sassing off Tanum! And this-this is because you just messed with the wrong chick,” I screamed at him.

Tanum pulled me off Ki and before I could do anything Ki slapped me. I wiped the blood off my lip and said,” Tanum, call 911.” Tanum did as I said and in that moment I kicked Ki with my spike heel in the stomach. Ki tried to punch me I dogged him and wheeled around to the other side. Tanum was taping this with his phone and laughing so hard. Ki tried to punch me but I wheeled around but once he caught me by the throat and held me in a head lock. I dipped forward and he flipped over my back onto the concrete. He threw punches which way and that and I dodged so fast I felt like magic Johnson. He punched me in the face once and I felt the blood gush out my bust lip. Ki tackled me and I flipped him over so that I was staring down at him.

“I don’t know you anymore.” I spat.

“You never did.” He hissed back.

I picked him up by the collar and let him go. When he hit me it didn’t hurt anymore it just messed with my head alittle more. I let him hit me more and more, more free shots than I would have given anyone else. I hit him one last time and he stumbled backwards a foot then knocked the wind out of me. I stumbled backwards and then it all went dark.

Too Be Continued…

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Teenage Band:p.3 - December 29, 2009 by Sydney Bailey

LATER THAT NIGHT…

The doorbell rang downstairs and my Mom yelled upstairs for me to get it. I put on a jacket and slipped on my jeans quickly. I ran downstairs and opened the door to see that Enrique guy.

“Jessica, Is this your boyfriend?” My Mom asked from behind the kitchen counter. “I thought you were going out with that Ki boy. He was charming, did you two break up?”

“Mom, this isn’t my boyfriend! And I broke up with Ki earlier, Mom, You need to get it together,” I snapped in a very high whisper.

“Um, Jesse, May I come in?” Enrique asked leaning against the door frame.

“N-”, But before I could answer he was already inside.

“Hi, I’m Pam, and you are?” My Mom asked.

“I’m Enrique, nice to meet you,Miss,” Enrique smiled.

She laughed and slowly left the room.

“What do you want from me???” I asked in a half yell.

“Nothing, just can we talk in private?” He asked.

“Yeah,” I mumbled.

We walked upstairs to my room and I let him in.

“Tanum says the only fault in your talented abilities is that you dont disipline  yourself enough. And that you also dont push yourself to the limit,” He said softly.

“And?” I asked questioningly.

“I’m going to teach you,” Enrique said sitting down on my bed.

“How?” I asked intrested.

“I’m going to take you to my house.” He said unsure. I blinked down at him and shrugged, I guess that would’ve been alright.

“Ok”.

So he took me to his house and pulled up in the gravel driveway. He led me to his garage and pulled up a chair for me, it was a really girly chair but I didn’t protest. He got out his guitar and played me a song soft and low like a lullaby, but the words he said in some other language. I watched him play it and when he was done he passed me the guitar.

“Play it.” He ordered.

“I-I can’t I dont know the song,” I studdered.

He avoided eye contact then said, “Play a song you know”.

I thought about it for a second then I played the song that I did for my Aunt Joanna before she left. It was a sad love song type, her husband had left her for some hotel waitress. But before I put the guitar down Enrique took it from me and pulled me toward him.

“Can I have some advice?” He asked.

“Yeah, anything”, I laughed.

“How do you let go of someone you love?” He asked thinking up into space.

“Um, I never really thought about it. I guess you imagine that person with someone else, but you truly never get over them you just have set in the back of your mind the truth. That you can’t be with that person if they wont let you in,” I said thinking about how Ki treated me for about two years.

“Thank you, Jesse,” He smiled.

“Um, I think it might be getting late,” I said snapping out of  my day dream.

“You just got here,” Enrique said looking at me curiously. Then my cell phone started ringing in my back pocket, I took it out and look at the caller ID. It was Ki.

“Hello,” I said answering the phone, “It’s Jesse”.

“What’re you doing? I’m sorry I did that to you earlier, I really am. Can I have one more chance?” Ki asked deperatley through the phone.

“Look, I can’t talk right now, I’m busy.” I lied.

Enrique laughed softly in the background then said, “Who is it?”

“Who’s that in the background? Who are you with?” Ki asked alarmed.

“Nobody, Uh, that was the pizza delivery boy. Oops…going through a tunnel the signals breaking up, bye.” I said hanging up the phone.

“That was Ki, right? Your Ex?” Enrique asked.

“Yes.”

“Then why do you care if he hears me in the background?” Enrique asked.

I tried to say something but Enrique cut through, “You are a horrible liar and your not over him.”

“Okay, maybe”, I laughed.

WE HUNG OUT FOR SPRING BREAK AND THE SETTING STARTS WHEN WE GET BACK FROM THE BREAK. THE DAY WE GOTO MY HIGH SCHOOL.

“Jesse, can I sit with you?” Ki asked looking at Enrique beside me.

“Yeah, I guess.” I muttered.

“Aren’t you going out with that Tanum dude?” Ki asked. But I knew this trick he was gonna make me say I was single, he was gonna make himself look good.

“I’m seeing someone, not him though,” I lied. Ki’s eyes burned into me until I let out a nervous smile.

“Oh, How’s your Mom?” He asked trying not to show how mad he really was.

“She’s fine, Ki, You know good and well I’m no good at small talk.”

“Fine, What’s his name? This guy your seeing, I want him to know your little tricks. Like when you lie you either avoid all eye contact or you get jittery. Or like when you want to kiss me you can’t stop talking about stupid stuff. Like when you’ve done something bad you click through the messages on your phone.”He laughed.”Or like how when we-”.

“Stop it! I get it,” I said avoiding every little glare he shoots at me.

“What’s his name?” Ki taunted me.

I picked up my lunch tray and Enrique made me sit back down. “I don’t like your tone, Sir, Please calm yourself”, He hissed.

“You don’t have one, do you? You  just made it up because you knew what I was going to do if you said no. But have you forgotten what I know about you, Jessica? I could send that video of Tanum at camp doing some pretty nasty stuff, I could show that video of when you cheated on me. The video that would have kept you from getting on the Cheerleading squad two years ago,” He said taking out his phone and clicking to the exact video.

It played over and over in my head every little part. Tanum was drunk and I tried to get him up but he wouldn’t he wouldn’t get off the camp leader’s pourch. He and his buddies went streaking he was the only one in his boxers and at the last moment when I finally got him off the pourch he told me some stuff and gave me a peck on the lips. And the funny thing was I kissed him back because I didn’t want him to be scrambled off to juvi for public intoxication. That night I stopped being ‘Jessica’ I was ‘Jesse’ from now on.

“What’s he talking about?” Enrique asked me.

Then before I could stop him he took the phone from Ki and played the five minute film. When it was over I couldn’t breathe, my secret revealed. Tanum was gonna kill me, and I was gonna suffer humiliation.

“What do you want? I’ll do anything.” I said closing my eyes.

“I want you to meet me at the diner by your house. Bring Tanum, leave the russian or whatever he is at home. I have a propasition for you.”

Ki took his phone and gave me a peck on the cheek as if it were old times.

“Jesse, it’s not that bad.” Enrique lied.

“I could lose my reputation, my friends, and other priviledges. Tanum could lose more than I ever expected since he’s quarter back for out football team”. I said slowly.

“That’s bad.”

“Yep.”

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Teenage Band:p.2 - December 29, 2009 by Sydney Bailey
This entry is part 1 of 0 in the series Teenage Band

Tanum must’ve been insane! No way in hell was I gonna spend more time with his big sister, she was like Barbie with red hair!

‘NO,” I said staring him down.

“I thought you’d say that,” Tanum laughed.”Meet  Enrique, Jesse, He’s our new guitar player.”

Five seconds later a guy who looked like some greek god or something got out of Tanum’s car, but I wasn’t impressed. He was wearing a ripped button down shirt and a vest. Bootcut jeans with a chain connected the back loop to his pocket and his hair was black with one silver streak in the middle. He smiled at me and I seemed to be lost of the ability to talk until he walked up to me.

“I’m Enrique, I didnt catch your name, Miss,” He smiled charmingly.

“I didn’t throw it,” I said painfully trying not to show any sign of emotion.

“Tanum tells me lots about you, you are as beautiful as he says. Infact, My girlfriend Julia isn’t as pretty as you are,” Enrique laughed in that incredible accent.

“Well, nice to meet you, Enrique,” I said sarcastically. “And Tanum, get off my property or I’ll march right upstairs and tell my Dad what you did last year at band camp.” Tanum smiled weakly then threw the keys to Enrique. Enrique smiled at me and gave a small wink. He passed me a piece of paper that sure enough had his number on it.

“I wont need it,” I said giving it back to him.”I’d like to keep my innocence.”

“Oh, Well, I’ll talk to you later,” Enrique winked.

Then they left and all I could do was go into my house and take a long bath organizing my thoughts.

TOO BE CONTINUED…

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Going(Hazel’s point of view) - December 29, 2009 by artsgurly983

“So. This is really our last… you know, moment together?” I asked once again, hoping this time for some reason the answer would turn out to be no. I knew this had to be some sick and cruel  joke Cameron was playing on me.

            “Hazel, for the 7th time, you can’t change that I’m moving to Houston,Texas.” he said. But this time it was different. The way he talked was kind of stern, and out of the 5 years I’ve been his best friend, he’s NEVER talked to me that way.

                   “Camry,” I cried as my voice carried a crescendo,” maybe I just want you to stay because I need you. You’re my only friend. But, maybe you need some time to think about what you have before you lose it!!!”

He stood there.  I couldn’t help myself. I threw the suitcase off of the edge of his bed and felt a tear roll down my cheek like a barrel rolling down a steep hill.  “I’m so sorry!” I said, my voice cracking. I could feel my throat tightening up. I slowly collapsed down the side of his bed.

“Hazel?… Hazel… Haze!!” he said. I could tell he was sincerely concerned. 

I turned my head. “ I’m going. You can’t change it. I’m..I, I..I’m sorry.”he said sorrowly.

“Cameron. Cameron!!! It’s time to go to the airport!” a random voice screamed from downstairs. It was his mom. “Oh no.” I thought.

” Hazel. I gotta…”Cameron tried to explain but I ran out of his house and to his mom who was now in their driveway.

“Ummm…. Mrs.Sherwood?”

“Yes, Hazel?”

“Can you give this to Cameron on the plane to Houston?”

In the palm of my hand was a necklace with a special charm.

“Oh. Yes honey. I will. It’s safe with me.” she said reassuringly.

I walked towards my house, buried in melancholy. That was the last of my friend, or that’s what I thought. 

Later on the plane towards Houston, Mrs.Sherwood gave the neckalace to Cameron. Cameron began to cry.

The charm was a BFFL  clay sphere that Hazel and Cameron had made in 3rd grade.

What else do you think the charm could have been? Post it as a comment.

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Bestfriend - December 20, 2009 by fisher.haley

I walked into my new classroom.I could feel my face turning red with embarresesment.”Ashlynn, you can sit right here.” The teacher patted a chair with crooked legs.My seat felt cold.”Hi, I’m Courtney.I sit right beside you!” A tall thin girl stood beside me.She had short hair and bright red cheeks.”Hi, I’m Ashlynn.I’m new-you noticed that didn’t you?” I was getting nervous.”Well, kinda!” she said with a giggle.

“Class we are going to multiply fractions,” our teacher explained, she held her hands across her stomach.I could see she wanted to introduce me ,but she saw I was very shy.”Okay, can everybody take out their math books?” she said. Courtney turned her head, “Do you need help?” I nodded.She pointed into my desk.It was a green book with pictures of math signs.”cool,” I muttered to myself.

“So, can you come with me and my friends for recess?” Courtney asked me as we stepped outside.”I’m not really that busy,” I said, trying to make a smile on my face.”Okay, this is Franny,” she said, pointing to a red haired girl with freckles all over her arms.”And, Martina,” she pointed towards a girl with blonde hair and I could see she was wearing make-up.”Hello, who are you?” Matina reached to shake my hand.”Ashlynn,” I replied, shaking her hand.

My walk home was very interesting.Almost every girl in my class wanted to walk with me.It was total caos, but I actually liked it.For once in my life someone wanted to be around me.I had always been in the back, holding my hands together, not even making a sound.Now, there was no need for me to talk because all the others wanted to.”Do you want to be friends?” rang in my ears the whole time.

“I have to go!” I said, as I turned the corner.”Bye,bye,bye!” everyone yelled.”What are you doing home so late?” my mom asked.”I made friends, mom! I was hanging out with them!” I was delighted.”Ya,ya, go do the dishes.” she replied.”But, mama, it’s not even my turn,” I put on my sad look.”No, Ashlynn go do the dishes now!” she yelled.After my chore was done I ran to my room.I was sad.My mom didn’t even care-once again-about my happiness.I bet she wouldn’t even care if I stepped out my window and left.

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christmas - December 20, 2009 by lonelybff

celebrating

happiness

rouldoph

i love presents

shop for presents

tree

make cookies

admiring your family

santa claus

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Moving Away {Part 2} - December 13, 2009 by raqshan

I sat at the lunch table in silence for a few minutes. Then all of a sudden all my friends started talking at once.

“When will you be moving?”Cynthia asked.

“When did you find out?”Jade questioned.

“How come you are moving?”Renee asked.

I waited till they quieted down before I told them everything. They stared at me in silence.”Uh..I have to go to Mr.Fredrick. He wants to give me a test that I’ll won’t be able to take if I don’t take it now. He said all of you guys will take it in January and I’ll be gone by then.” I got up and walked away.

I walked home that afternoon with Grace and Sandy as usual. They talked about what happened at school. I talked to. Inside however I felt sad. How could I move? Tomorrow was Saturday so I was going to Graces house.  She was having a sleepover. Sandy,Jade,Cynthia were gonna be there. Renee doesn’t go to Grace’s sleepovers because she live on the other side of town.

That night I sat in bed reading The Babysitters Club: Good- bey,Stacey, Good-bey . I had read that book nearly a hundred times but everytime it made me teary.

To be continued……

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(Part two)The Game - December 13, 2009 by grace

 ”Were in the dinosaur world,wierd,”said  Jade looking around mesteriosly.

 ”We are in.. omg I think I might just faint,”I said wide eyed looking at the shadow of a T-Rex.”ROAR”went the beast.We all screamed and juped in a curcle.we were shaking like a bunch of chihuahuas.

 ”Just don’t move he wont be able to see us,”Raqshan said with a worried and frightened voice.When Raqshan looked back at ,us we were already a mile away.”Wait up!”yelled Raqshan.I was the only one who ran back for her.

 ”Come on hurry,”said a strange familier voice.It was my long lost daddy.”Sweety,did you play the board game?”he said saddly,as I looked at the floor.

 ”Yes,but who new it would lead to this its just a game,”I said.”Were are the others,”Iasked worreing more than ever.

 ”They went into dino palace,no saving them,lets go,”He said dragging me from the place I stood.A tear fell I was ganna miss them.

“Come on lets find help’,” Raqshan said wipeing a tear from her cheak.

 ”I’m sorry guys,but if we find help we will tell them to go look for three nice girls,ok,”he said wipeing a tear from my chin.

“Ok,lets hurry,”me and Raqshan said at the same time piking up pace.

 Its been three days and we see this wiered hole in the sky….the roof of our house?!”Our way out,”I said so excitedly.We staked everything we could find.”AHH,” I said faling onto my living room floor.Then Raqshan came then my papa.

“lets go to the police,: my dad said grabing the keys and the game.When we got there dad said,”This the most dangerus thing in the world.I am Michael Kensle I got stuck in here and now my daughter and friends are in there still.”

“Ha ha funny lets play,”he was already rolling the dice.”6,”the cop sai smiling.Then the feiry poped up.

“Say dinosar land go to dino palace and there should be three terified girls.take them and take them to the big pile of stuff and pull yourself out,”Michael said.

“Dinosar land,” the ofecer said.He wasn’t serprised to be in the dinosar land.He found the girls and took them out of the game.”Nice joke,know get lost.

 ”Thank you,”said Michael huging us.”Thanks alot.”

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Raqshan my BFF - December 13, 2009 by grace

when i tink of all the good times i feel sad

when i think of the ruff times i feel worse

and now you gone i dont now if i cant cry 

what shal i do without you

BFF

ILL MISS U

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V.I.P - December 12, 2009 by grace

 ”OMG!”screamed Sassy jumping up and down like crazy.She jumped on her bed and called her best friend Chelsy.”Gess what I just got….two tickets to the Demi Lavado Concert,”she said waiting for the scream from the other side…”AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!”the two girls screamed.

 ”How cool!When is it and were?”she said concerned.

 ”It is tomarow in Orange County,”Sassy said.She was already looking for somthing to wear.When night came the two girls couldn’t go to sleep.

 Morning came and Sassy woke up at 9:ooA.M.She checked her mesages,”Hi,you awake I’ll be there at 10:00A.M ok?Bye,”Chelsy said.”OMG,thats one hour!”Sassy said hoping out of bed.By the time Chelsy got there Sassy was ready.

 ”Let’s go shoping,and get neew outfits,”chelsy said loping onto the couch.

“OK,let me get my stuff,”Sassy said alreay going into her room.She got $65. and her jaket.When they got thier they found a new peir of skiny jeans,a cool hat,sneakers,and a Demie Lavato shirt all for $45. 

 ”5,4,3,2,1 lets go”screamed Chelsy already walking out the door hoping into the driver seat of the car.When Sassy was in and buckled up, Chelsy steped on the pedle.’We are here!”said Chelsy excitedly.they hoped out and screamed.

 ”Look it’s Demie’s trailer,lets go say hi,”Sassy said with a little scream.”Knok Knok”.

“Hey, fans come in I got the letter with your pics in it,there cool.Come on in,”Demie said smileing at them.The three girls sat on the couch.”How would you two……..

 coment on what you thought demie said. 

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The Girl That Dreams - December 12, 2009 by grace

Crash..Crash..went the waves it was music to my ears,and the beautiful chirps of baby sea gulls.It was the most fun boat tri ever.We were here the one the only Paris.”Bojor,”I said to all the people I meet. 

“Bojor!”a beautiful little voice said.A girl my age walked up to me, she was smiling wearing a wonderful summer dress.”You here to stay at our palace,”she said with a deep axcent.Her hair and and eye’s shined in the nice sunny sky.”Walcome to Peris were evryone is hapy!”she said striking a beautiful pose.

 ”Yes I guess I am here to stay at your palace.Do you have a bath I haven’t taken a real shower in months.Ohh and all my clothes fell overboard during a storm sooo,can i barow a dress to were till I buy new clothes,”I said with a croked smile.

 ”Why, yes you may.And we can go shoping ….”she said then she froze”No shopping we will go to the park and tomarow well go shop.”

 I gave a strange look as we walked into the palace.”Why cant we go shoping?”I asked tillting my head and not bugging from the spot I was in.Then she looked down both halls and pulled me into her room.

 ”I can tell the feauter,and we mustn’t go shop,”she said with a worred look on her face.She started to get teary eyes.

“I am going to go shop”I said running outside to a cool shop with cute clothes.

 ”Nnnnnoooooo!” she said running fast behind me.There was a loud crackling noise.We both looked up.

 ”Ahhhhhhh,Help!”I said as a bord was falling right on top of me!

 ”I’ll save you!”the little girl screamed as she jumped for me……….BAM!

 ”You saved me!”I said looking at the broken pece of wood were I once stood,were my life flashed before my eyes.”Thank ou,”I said huging the little girl.

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Moving Away - December 12, 2009 by raqshan

         I laughed so hard my sides hurt. “And then he goes and starts making faces at the teacher behinde her back!” Sandy says. Grace stopped laughing long enough to say,” He must have been surpriesed when you showed the vedio tape of him to Ms. Greman.” We reached my house and I waved to them and the called,”See you Raqshan! Call us!” I rushed inside and took in the sents of my house. I flopped in a coach and turned on the t.v. My mom was a subtitute so I had to stay home alone on days she came home late. I watched  Sony With a Chance for a while then I got up and went up to my room. I lay on my bed and did my homework until I heared the door downstairs open. “Mom!” I yelled as I got down stairs. “Hello!” she greated me. “Oh! Mom, guess what??” I asked her almost unable to contain my excitement. “What?” she asked calmy. “After winter break we’re gonna have a spelling bee again!” My mom seemed quiet for a while before she turned to me. “Honey,”she said sadly,”Let me tell you something.” She led me to the living room and I sat down. “Look,”she said as she stered hard at table,”We…How do I put this?…?” she took a deep breath and continued,”Your father got a job that is willing to pay him more!” “That’s great!” I shouted,”But why do you sound so sad?” “Well,”she glanced around the house and then said,”The busness is not here. It’s in San Francisco.”

 ”What?!” I asked not able to wrap my mind around this idea. “We are going to move,”my mom said. I got up and ran to my room. I sat on my bed for a while then I got out my cell phone and dialed Grace’s number. Grace picked up on the first ring. “Hello?” she asked. “Hi.” I replied quietly. “What’s wrong?” she asked me. “I’m moving!” I burst out. Grace was quiet for a minute then she burst out laughing. “What,”I demanded. “I just didn’t know you had such a good sence of humor!”Grace laughed. I was silent. She seemed to understand that I wasn’t kidding. “Can I come over?” I asked. “Um..I’ll ask,”Grace replied, there was some conversation on the other end of the phone. Then Grace’s voice came on,”My mom said that it was ok if you could come.” “Can you ask Sandy to come?”I asked hopefully.

 I arrived at Grace’s house in ten minutes. It’s just a short walk from my house and it was still 3:00. Nick answered the door and let me in. Grace was in the kitchen finishing of a ice-cream cone. She grabbed for another one and offered me one. We went to her room and sat licking our cones in silence. “So..,”Grace vencured finally,”Are you really moving?” “Yes,unless Mom is playing a trick and it would most unlike her.”I replied sadly. Just then the door bell rang and Grace got up to get it. A moment later she came back with Sandy following her. Sandy had a worried look on her face. She plopped down next to me on Grace’s bed. “So, What is the Big Emergency? You were talking about?”Sandy asked. I gulped and then took a deep breath,”I’m moving.” Sandy stared at me. Grace had already burt into tears. ”You can’t move!”Sandy cried seeming to have found her voice. “Tell that to my mom,”I told her.

        The next day in school I found Grace and Sandy standing by my locker. “Hay!”they cried in unison. I greated themwith my usual greating,”Whatsup’?” I looked at their faces. They were acting as if nothing had happened. At school it was hard. I had to tell my teachers that we were moving. Each one of them looked more upset than the last. Their face crumpled up and they just said,”Really?”

  At lunch we had hot pizza. I sat at my regular table. Sandy,Grace,and  alot of my other friends like Jade joined me. I sat at my table and looked at all my friend. Grace and Sandy had told them. They all looked sad.

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(part one)The game - December 12, 2009 by grace

  I was sitting at my seat waiting to get to school.We were here.I looked up at the old school it was huge.I saw my best friend Raqshan waiting for me at the door.”Hey,”I said to her.I skipped over happily.I smiled and said,”What’s up.”

 ”Nothing,”she said as we walked into the school.”Want to go to the bassement after school,I heard that there is realy cool stuff for like 1$.”

“Ok,thats what we’ll do,but we should take Sandy,Jade,andCinthya with us,”I said while looking around for the three girls.Then we saw them walking by and ran up to them.They were looking for us too.

 ”Hey, we’re going to the basement after school you,wan’t to come,”said Raqshan.”I heared they have cool stuff there.”

 ”Sure we’d love to come along with you guys it’ll be fun,”Sandy said.We all walked to L.A class.We were the class pet’s,so we always get here 10 minets before class.It’s pretty cool she allways lets us go run erands for her.It’s so totaly cool.

 Hours pasted and it was acouple minets till after school.Tick,Tock,Tick,Tock went the clock.”RING” went the school bell.There was a long line and we were next to go inside.

 ”Look over here it’s a cool board game,”said Jade looking at the game mesteriasly.

To be continued……

“How much?”asked Cinthya misteriasly looking over Jades shoulder.

 ”6$,we can get it ,yay!”I said with excitement.

 We got home and started the game,and got some snacks.”I’ll go first,” I said.I rolled the dice.”Come on ,come on,”I said.I rolled,”6,”I shouted. Then the book in the midle opened.I read outloud,”Io Fairy to my wishy.”

 BBBBOOOOMMMM!Went the game,a fairy poped out.”Make a wish,”she said in a very sweet kind voice.

 They all started to laugh.”I wish we were in dinosaur time!”

“KAZAM!”

“OMG!”Sandy screamed in horrer.

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The Year 3099 P. 6 - December 12, 2009 by raqshan

 ”SILENCE!!!!!!” the king roared. The ministers quieted at once.  “There has been an a great upeving in the past few days!” the king said looking aroung the table,”We were on the verge of killing all the Sentor Students. Then they over ran us.” I looked around and hid behind a large plotted plant. “So, we have to go into hiding and take our prisoners too.” “Wait!”one minister cried. He got up from the table and spoke,”We have one student.” The king gasped,”Where?!” Suddenly a large shadow loomed over me! “Ah!”a gruff voice barked. I felt a large habd in my long black hair and felt someone or something yank me up by it.

 I was dragged from my hiding and into plain view of the king and his ministers. They jumpped up from their seats and cried in unison,”SPI!” “You are commen’ with me!” I tried to break free but The person,who I know could see was and Andorian gaurd, was strong and he dragged me to the jail. I was thrown into a dark seel and the gaurd licked the gate. “You can’t lock me up!”I shouted. “I can’t?”the gaurd said with a toothy grin,”I thought I just did! I wa sleft in the dark all alone!

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The Lunch Election Pt. 1 - December 1, 2009 by cacarrier

“I wonder what would happen if a kid became president.” It was an innocent thought that flowed from my mouth. All the people at my lunch table began to ponder the idea.

“Well,” I murmured, scrabbling in my mind. “Who do you think it would be?” Almost everybody said “Me.” I didn’t, however. I don’t want to be president of the United States of America. It’s just not for me.

“Why not have a sample election?” The freight train pouring from my mouth couldn’t stop. It had better. This was getting out of control. Everybody, of course, wanted to.

“All in favor of Eric for prez?” I called. Two hands in the air. “Matthew?” I asked. No response. “Brian?” “I’m not in the election, ” Brian mumbled hurriedly. “Gotcha,” I replied. Any body for Erin?” Two hands. “Lindsey?” Nothing. “Me?” Nobody. Phew!

“It’s a beautiful day in the cafeteria, and the scores all tied up between Eric and Erin. This is the Kid 4 Prez election. Tiebreaker is… trivia!” Now Judge of Kid 4 Prez trivia election, I scrabbled in my mind for a complicated trivia question. “Got it!’ I suddenly yelped. “First category is… body parts! True or false. The fibula is located near the rib cage. You have one minute to answer. Time… starts… now. ” I relaxed as the candidates pondered. “Who has the answer?” I asked.

-Who do you think had the correct answer?-

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