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Day: 20. March 2010

Hunters : Keepers of the Forest; Passage #2 - March 20, 2010 by raqshan
This entry is part 2 of 4 in the series Hunters


Continuation of: Chapter 1

SnowHeart padded out of the hunter’s den. Outside dark clouds were forming as cats and cats began to gather under a huge rock. Perched on the rock, was a gold cat, SunLight. Next to him sat a cat that had a similar white pelt like SnowHeart.

“Cats of HunterClan!” SunLight announced, “StoneTail, my deputy, is back and has completed his mission successfully.”

Mews of joy rang through the assembled cats. SnowHeart sat down next to StormEye and asked, “That’s StoneTail!”

StormEye did not reply, he was gesturing with his tail to RoseyPelt. SnowHeart rolled her eyes and returned her attention back to SunLight.

“With help from FoxTail, RedClaw, and FeatherHeart, StoneTail has defeated FishingClan and took back Steppingstone Ridge!” SunLight waited for the loud cries of the cats to fade before he add, “We also have two new apprentices.”

SnowHeart looked around. No cat seemed excited or fidgeting. Are we the new apprentices? SnowHeart wondered.

“SnowHeart and StormEye, come up to the high rock!”

Startled, SnowHeart took a moment to realize what had happened. She got up and slowly walked up to the high rock. SunLight looked down at her with bright green eyes. StormEye was the first one on the rock. SnowHeart was slower. She sat next to StormEye and looked down. The first face she saw was FireGem’s. She nodded encouragingly while her bright blue eyes twinkled with pride.

“StormEye,” SunLight addressed her brother first, “You are old enough to be an apprentice, are you ready?”

”Yes,” StormEye replied bravely.

“Good. LightClan asks you FoxTail to train StormEye. You were taught by me, I hope you pass down all the knowledge of hunting to this young apprentice.”

FoxTail padded up to StormEye and laid the tip of his bushy tail on StormEye’s head.

SunLight turned to SnowHeart. SnowHeart could feel her heart racing. Who is going to be my mentor?

“SnowHeart, Are you ready to be an apprentice?”

“Yes.” SnowHeart answered breathlessly.

SunLight nodded and scanned the crowd of cats. Spotting the one he was looking for he said, ”GrayChest, you will teach SnowHeart.”

To SnowHeart’s surprise the same cat who had addressed her and StormEye in the hunter’s den approached SnowHeart.

“You’re still not allowed in the hunter’s den,” GrayChest said good-humouredly.

He touched her head with the tip of his tail.

“Wow! We won’t be sleeping in the nursery anymore!” StormEye exclaimed with delight.

The two of them were heading towards the apprentices den with their tail high in the air. SnowHeart felt a bit queasy at the thought of sleeping with other apprentices.

The apprentices den was a small cave in the side of the cliff with long vines draped over the entrance. SnowHeart pushed her head cautiously into the den. Inside there were about five other cats, all apprentices. One of them, a short hair tom with a pelt the color of leaping flames and large amber eyes padded over to SnowHeart.

“Hi!” he greeted her, “My name is FlameClaw.”

“I’m SnowHeart and this is my brother StormEye,” SnowHeart introduced them.

RoseyPelt appeared beside FlameClaw and purred, “SnowHeart! Didn’t I tell you SunLight would make apprentices?”

SnowHeart purred in delight.

“Come here,” FlameClaw showed them to two beds of moss, “You shall sleep here.”

“Thanks,” SnowHeart replied gratefully. She curled up on the moss and looked closely at the other cats.

There was a white pelt and copper splotched she-cat. An other was with dark black furred and bright yellow-eyed tom. The last cat was a light shaded brown tom with dark black marks on his head.

“Oh! How rude! You guys didn’t even introduce yourselves!” RoseyPelt exclaimed.

“I am PatchPelt,” said the she-cat.

“BrackenClaw,“ said the brown tom.

“I am DaggerHeart,” growled the midnight shaded tom.

SnowHeart tried to purr to him as she had with the others, but something wouldn’t let her.

Perhaps it was his eyes. Maybe it was the way his claws kept sheathing and unsheathing as if ready to spring into battle with her. Whatever it was, SnowHeart knew one thing; he gave her an uneasy feeling.

To be continued….

The Dragon Kin - March 20, 2010 by Eric
This entry is part 2 of 2 in the series The Dragon Kin

Wait! Said Jessica we are not done eating yet. Ugg… Then Jasmine started stuffing her mouth with her popcorn chicken. Eat slower..please. She drank her Pepsi and it went down down down there! Fine…why do you want to go to the cornfield its like 9 miles away we can do it tomorrow…No! we have to do it now. They left the KFC and headed west…Hurry up were gonna miss it! I have no Idea what you mean but o..k 15  Minutes later they reached Riverdale. Hey there it is! OK I will give you 5 minutes to do whatever…Jasmine entered the cornfield and headed toward a way she did n`t know what way just A way.Then it hit her to see where the kin was she would have to dream. So she lay on the ground and dreamed and she saw a blur but it  turned into a single blue grass. She awoke and continued. Walking turning every corner no blue grass. It was a dead end but Jasmine stayed rooted to her spot for she found the blue grass, but no Dragon. She sat hands in her face and heard the faint voice of her sister calling her,she followed slouching her way to the light. But another sound caught her attention she slowly looked over her shoulder and she glimpsed at a 2 foot dragon kin sparkling in the sunlight. Omigosh! she said as she picked up the kin your real well I would be nice to say I knew you were real but I can cause I didn`t know. If its right for us to help each other then you need a name how a`bout Bob……ya ok you win your too cool for a name like Bob all right Amari ya thats better…Jasmine! Lets go home Amari but If you burn my pillow your going outside…

Money! Alice in Wonderland Edition - March 20, 2010 by Ben Lev

Setting: Wonderland

At rise, the Red Queen wakes up and smells money.

Red Queen: Money! Where is it?[slow mean voice]

Alice:Hi Red Queen I still hate you.

Red Queen : Well if you just have money give it to me.

Alice: No!

Red Queen : Well maybe were getting another war.


[Red Queen smells more money]

Red Quenn : Where is it ?

Alice: Bye![madly]

Cat: Hi! Red queen I’ve seen you coming.

Red Queen : Well yes! Do you have money ?

Cat: No!

Red Queen: Aha !

Cat: Why did you say “Aha” ?

Red Queen : Just saying.

Cat:Well, okay ![disappearing]

Red Queen: Bye!

[Red Queen smells even more money]

Red Queen : Now where ?

White Queen : Go , now.

Red Queen : No! Do you have any money ?

White Queen : Never I’ll give it to you.

Red Queen : See , you in the next war .

[Red Queen walking away]

White Queen : What ?

[Red Queen back in the castle]

Red Queen : Nothing , Wow! All day, I need to know what to like and have .Yeah right !

All:The End

This is another story from my book The Play Book

The Big Dream - March 20, 2010 by Ben Lev

  Once I was so tired after going to Mt.Charleston . I fell asleep on the drive home.The dream was a big adventure.

   When , I was sleeping in Christmastime.I woke up because I heard something downstairs and then I saw a Jewish god or macabie and I also saw Santa Claus.They wanted to hug me and they came to my HOUSE . I ran and tried to tell my sister.She didn’t believe me even mom , too.

    So I tried to stop sleeping but a phantom ghost came and said me to believe.I did believe in my dreams, but then I stopped and the phantom , macabie , and Santa Claus weren’t there. Then , I believed again and they were there.

    The macabie showed me his life and Santa , too.”Ho,Ho,Ho!”, Santa said. Now I want to believe. So I woke up when we were home and I was happy.

                            The  End

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