Month: March 2010

If I can

say you are nice in a

way at a bay .

I would leap and say a

ray that can save the day.

I could beep and lay

and save my friend that way mean in a way.

Today was a great day

to play .

A ray that took us all over the world

is the way .

When I did that way

it went landing on the bay .

I went out saying

“Wow” laying .

This day is beautiful

right today .

That I found love as beautiful as the bay.

To think today a day that was

bad as hay.

But now I have to go home way to

lay in this summer .

Now I have to say

The End

It was a cold night in the city. I raced down the steps of the house towards the alley. The alley was empty, except for two trash cans. I picked up the lid on one of them and pressed my hand against it. A door opened up in the alley. I walked into the room, and the door closed behind me. The room was filled with computers of all kinds. There were kids strewn around. I walked up to a kid in the back, working away at a computer. “So, E.J., ya finally made it?” he said surlily, looking up from the computer. “Yeah, Mark. But the only reason I was late is because I snatched this,” I whispered, rooting around in my jungle of a backpack. I pulled out a blue-and-orange-striped flash drive and waved it in front of him. “It’s got Windows 8 Preview on it. I got it from Best Buy; I went back behind the Geek Squad counter. But get this, Mark. It also has 24 book reports on it. One for each book we’re doing right now.” “Wow, E.J.! That’s cool! Now let’s tell the others our plan,” Mark said. I pounded the gavel, and one by one, kids began to look at me, the leader, the ultimate hacker. This is my life as Eddie J. Baker: Kid Hacker.

Why is the water still

and why is the sugar dill

What is it

Asked Susie Ranbit

The faces turn

and then it burns

There is a scream

Out steps a lima bean

As huge as the biggest house

He was wearing a blue and white blouse

with flowers everywhere

It was too much to bear

What will we do

asked Tommy Laro

Then it went black

and I saw Jack

My older brother

So I ran to my mother

I am now awake

See in light

See in right

See the world

staring bright

See the fights

in the night

See the fights

in the light.

Dear Writers/Poets,

Votes are in! Thanks to all the members who have participated and submitted their beautiful, creative poems.

We have a tie this time, we are declaring two winner Poets. Raqshan for the ” The Beauty in …Fire?” and jb2blessed for the “Idioms”

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I was crying all alone in my room watching tv,then the tv went to bad flood warning!I wiped the last tear from my face and jumped onto my bed and screamed.

“Come here darling!”my mom said opening the door.She caried me outside and I looked around the waterr was already to her ankles!We both sreamed.We were so sceared.My mom took me back in the house.We put on our life jackets and went back out side.

“Mommy!”I yelled as the water bursted into the house

Continuation of: Chapter 1

SnowHeart padded out of the hunter’s den. Outside dark clouds were forming as cats and cats began to gather under a huge rock. Perched on the rock, was a gold cat, SunLight. Next to him sat a cat that had a similar white pelt like SnowHeart.

“Cats of HunterClan!” SunLight announced, “StoneTail, my deputy, is back and has completed his mission successfully.”

Mews of joy rang through the assembled cats. SnowHeart sat down next to StormEye and asked, “That’s StoneTail!”

StormEye did not reply, he was gesturing with his tail to RoseyPelt. SnowHeart rolled her eyes and returned her attention back to SunLight.

“With help from FoxTail, RedClaw, and FeatherHeart, StoneTail has defeated FishingClan and took back Steppingstone Ridge!” SunLight waited for the loud cries of the cats to fade before he add, “We also have two new apprentices.”

SnowHeart looked around. No cat seemed excited or fidgeting. Are we the new apprentices? SnowHeart wondered.

“SnowHeart and StormEye, come up to the high rock!”

Startled, SnowHeart took a moment to realize what had happened. She got up and slowly walked up to the high rock. SunLight looked down at her with bright green eyes. StormEye was the first one on the rock. SnowHeart was slower. She sat next to StormEye and looked down. The first face she saw was FireGem’s. She nodded encouragingly while her bright blue eyes twinkled with pride.

“StormEye,” SunLight addressed her brother first, “You are old enough to be an apprentice, are you ready?”

”Yes,” StormEye replied bravely.

“Good. LightClan asks you FoxTail to train StormEye. You were taught by me, I hope you pass down all the knowledge of hunting to this young apprentice.”

FoxTail padded up to StormEye and laid the tip of his bushy tail on StormEye’s head.

SunLight turned to SnowHeart. SnowHeart could feel her heart racing. Who is going to be my mentor?

“SnowHeart, Are you ready to be an apprentice?”

“Yes.” SnowHeart answered breathlessly.

SunLight nodded and scanned the crowd of cats. Spotting the one he was looking for he said, ”GrayChest, you will teach SnowHeart.”

To SnowHeart’s surprise the same cat who had addressed her and StormEye in the hunter’s den approached SnowHeart.

“You’re still not allowed in the hunter’s den,” GrayChest said good-humouredly.

He touched her head with the tip of his tail.

“Wow! We won’t be sleeping in the nursery anymore!” StormEye exclaimed with delight.

The two of them were heading towards the apprentices den with their tail high in the air. SnowHeart felt a bit queasy at the thought of sleeping with other apprentices.

The apprentices den was a small cave in the side of the cliff with long vines draped over the entrance. SnowHeart pushed her head cautiously into the den. Inside there were about five other cats, all apprentices. One of them, a short hair tom with a pelt the color of leaping flames and large amber eyes padded over to SnowHeart.

“Hi!” he greeted her, “My name is FlameClaw.”

“I’m SnowHeart and this is my brother StormEye,” SnowHeart introduced them.

RoseyPelt appeared beside FlameClaw and purred, “SnowHeart! Didn’t I tell you SunLight would make apprentices?”

SnowHeart purred in delight.

“Come here,” FlameClaw showed them to two beds of moss, “You shall sleep here.”

“Thanks,” SnowHeart replied gratefully. She curled up on the moss and looked closely at the other cats.

There was a white pelt and copper splotched she-cat. An other was with dark black furred and bright yellow-eyed tom. The last cat was a light shaded brown tom with dark black marks on his head.

“Oh! How rude! You guys didn’t even introduce yourselves!” RoseyPelt exclaimed.

“I am PatchPelt,” said the she-cat.

“BrackenClaw,“ said the brown tom.

“I am DaggerHeart,” growled the midnight shaded tom.

SnowHeart tried to purr to him as she had with the others, but something wouldn’t let her.

Perhaps it was his eyes. Maybe it was the way his claws kept sheathing and unsheathing as if ready to spring into battle with her. Whatever it was, SnowHeart knew one thing; he gave her an uneasy feeling.

To be continued….

Wait! Said Jessica we are not done eating yet. Ugg… Then Jasmine started stuffing her mouth with her popcorn chicken. Eat slower..please. She drank her Pepsi and it went down down down there! Fine…why do you want to go to the cornfield its like 9 miles away we can do it tomorrow…No! we have to do it now. They left the KFC and headed west…Hurry up were gonna miss it! I have no Idea what you mean but o..k 15  Minutes later they reached Riverdale. Hey there it is! OK I will give you 5 minutes to do whatever…Jasmine entered the cornfield and headed toward a way she did n`t know what way just A way.Then it hit her to see where the kin was she would have to dream. So she lay on the ground and dreamed and she saw a blur but it  turned into a single blue grass. She awoke and continued. Walking turning every corner no blue grass. It was a dead end but Jasmine stayed rooted to her spot for she found the blue grass, but no Dragon. She sat hands in her face and heard the faint voice of her sister calling her,she followed slouching her way to the light. But another sound caught her attention she slowly looked over her shoulder and she glimpsed at a 2 foot dragon kin sparkling in the sunlight. Omigosh! she said as she picked up the kin your real well I would be nice to say I knew you were real but I can cause I didn`t know. If its right for us to help each other then you need a name how a`bout Bob……ya ok you win your too cool for a name like Bob all right Amari ya thats better…Jasmine! Lets go home Amari but If you burn my pillow your going outside…

Hi. I am Eliza Coralva. I have escaped slavery with my brother, Walt.                                                       

I’m Walt Coralva. My sister Eliza and I have escaped a secret civilization that is important to the world, but is nonexistant in time. This way, slavery is technically allowed and

Hey! You said I could write this part! Anyways, slavery is high in this town, or village, I guess you would say. We once were slaves to Tatamussia, the mother of the King of this land. This land is called

Eliza! You should disguise the name so no one knows where we are!

Good idea, Walt. Okay, so the name of this land is… um… Rakarali. Yes. Okay, you know that the name of the village is changed for our protection, because if one of those… um… kezaas

Yes, “kezaas” isn’t the true name of our enemies, but, well, I’ll let Eliza explain.

Of course, Walt, leave the explaining to me… just like always. Okay so, the kezaas are chasing us. We are the children of Wumiz, the god of Rakarali.

 You see, the relatives of Wumiz are all linked to this stone that can give anyone massive power. It’s at the Temple of Wumiz, all the way across the village, almost in SilverFox territory.

SilverFoxes are the enemies of our enemies, I guess you would say. The SilverFoxes believe that Wumiz stole their land and gave it to the Rakaralians.

Right. So now we don’t only have the villagers on our tails, we have the SilverFoxes, too.

We are trying to get home, to New York, back to our small house on the hill near Albany. Oh, I miss our old house.

So what do we do? We are camping out near the SilverFox land, but not on the side near the Temple of Wumiz. Tell us, we need help.

I, Elizabeth Coralva,

and I, Walter Coralva

will truly give you

all that we have

if you help us.

Sincerely,

Eliza and Walter
(So did you like the style and theme? Comment what you think should happen. Thanks!)

Setting: Wonderland

At rise, the Red Queen wakes up and smells money.

Red Queen: Money! Where is it?[slow mean voice]

Alice:Hi Red Queen I still hate you.

Red Queen : Well if you just have money give it to me.

Alice: No!

Red Queen : Well maybe were getting another war.

Alice:[gasp]

[Red Queen smells more money]

Red Quenn : Where is it ?

Alice: Bye![madly]

Cat: Hi! Red queen I’ve seen you coming.

Red Queen : Well yes! Do you have money ?

Cat: No!

Red Queen: Aha !

Cat: Why did you say “Aha” ?

Red Queen : Just saying.

Cat:Well, okay ![disappearing]

Red Queen: Bye!

[Red Queen smells even more money]

Red Queen : Now where ?

White Queen : Go , now.

Red Queen : No! Do you have any money ?

White Queen : Never I’ll give it to you.

Red Queen : See , you in the next war .

[Red Queen walking away]

White Queen : What ?

[Red Queen back in the castle]

Red Queen : Nothing , Wow! All day, I need to know what to like and have .Yeah right !

All:The End

This is another story from my book The Play Book

  Once I was so tired after going to Mt.Charleston . I fell asleep on the drive home.The dream was a big adventure.

   When , I was sleeping in Christmastime.I woke up because I heard something downstairs and then I saw a Jewish god or macabie and I also saw Santa Claus.They wanted to hug me and they came to my HOUSE . I ran and tried to tell my sister.She didn’t believe me even mom , too.

    So I tried to stop sleeping but a phantom ghost came and said me to believe.I did believe in my dreams, but then I stopped and the phantom , macabie , and Santa Claus weren’t there. Then , I believed again and they were there.

    The macabie showed me his life and Santa , too.”Ho,Ho,Ho!”, Santa said. Now I want to believe. So I woke up when we were home and I was happy.

                            The  End

                                         Money! Spongebob Edition

                                          At rise Mr.Crabs wakes up and smells money.

                                         Mr.Crabs: Money! Money! Where is it ?

                                        Spongebob: Hi! Mr.Crabs here’s forty – five cents. I’ll give it

                                        to you because…..

                                       Mr.Crabs: Give it to me.

                                       Spongebob: OK!

                                         [Mr.Crabs smells money]

                                       Mr.Crabs: Money !

                                      Spongebob: Bye,Crabs!

                                      Mr.Crabs:Money!

                                      Squidward: Hi,Crabs![tiredly]

                                     Mr.Crabs: Do you have money ? If you do, give it to me.

                                     Squidward:Here’s twenty cents.

                                     Mr.Crabs:Aha![taking the money]

                                      Squidward: What was that for ?

                                     Mr.Crabs: Nothing!

                                      Squidward: OK!

                                     [Mr.Crabs smells more money]

                                     Mr.Crabs:Money!

                                      Patrick: Hi!

                                   Mr.Crabs: Do you have money?

                                    Patrick: Ahhhhhhhhhh…….

                                   Mr.Crabs: Whatever!

                                    Mr.Crabs: Do you have money ?

                                  Fish: Naaaaaaaaa!

                                    Mr.Crabs:Rrrrrrrrr!

                                   Mr.Crabs: Just sixty – five cents . Wow! All day I need to know

                                    what to like and have.

                                    All:The End!

     This is another page I made from the book The Play Book.

Money!  Underwater Edtion

At rise, Opah wakes up and smells money.

Fish:Hi, Opah here’s 2 sandollars. I’ll give it to you because…..

Opah: Give it to me.

Fish:OK! Here.

[Opah smells money]

Opah: Money!

Fish: Bye , Opah !

Opah: Money !

Sea turtle: Hi,Opah ![tiredly]

Opah: Do you have money ? If you do give it to me.

Sea turtle: Here’s 1 sandollar.

Opah:Aha![taking the money away]

Sea turtle: What was that for ?

Opah: Nothing!

Sea turtle : OK!

[Opah smells more money]

Opah:Money!Money!

Clownfish: Hi!

Opah:Do you have money ?

Clownfish:Ahhhhhhhhhh………

Opah: Whatever!

Opah:Do you have money?

Octo.: Yeah,25 sandollars.

Opah: Give it to me!

Octo.:No,now bye!

Opah:Rrrrrrrrrrr!

Opah:Just 3 sandollars for all day.I really need to know what to like and have.

All:The End

 This is another page from the book I made The Play Book