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Day: 3. July 2010

Taken - July 3, 2010 by Marlee

My name is Sally Lou, I was taken March 20, 1995, I was 14 yrs old. It all started when I was walking home from my friends house, We got into a fight and I was mad, I saw this man out by her street watching every move I make, I’ve only seen him twice, but he’s seen me more. He asked me a few questions but I ignored him, he got really mad after I started running, I made it halfway down the street and he caught me, I was taken in a trap he made for me. My parents were looking for me and never found me. I was brought out of this world by a guy….

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Candy - July 3, 2010 by Marlee

C- Cruncy
A- Awesome
N- Not bitter
D- Delicious
Y- Yummy

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 3, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 5 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 6

“So why did you decide to come in my cabin in the first place?”I ask ,even if I was glade for it to be over with.”I…..don’t think you need to know that I mean…ppsh pa tsh pa ta phs…” “WHY?” “I came in to take your friends…” “ah!”I said with a grin.”well you-” “your so like me!”I interruptedand we laughed for a while as the feeling came back to me but I was learning to ignore it so it didn’t bother me like it used to and I didn’t have to ask Fathom about the promise thing,unfortunatelyI had to tell it to myself very often.”She is isn’t she?” “who said that?” Fathom asked scared.I was scared too because I thought we were alone in the pool but I’d know that voice anywhere.It was THE BUS DRIVER.

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The Weird Babysitter.. - July 3, 2010 by Marlee

My mom had to work late again and hired a babysitter, ” Like I need a babysitter?” It was a Thursday morning when my mom woke me up to get ready, “Dinggggg Donggggg” Hunny can you get the door” My mom said. I opened the door and a lady in a black gown with red stillettos was standing in my doorway, When she walked past me I got the shivers, “Somethings wrong with her” I said to myself, as i walked to the kitchen to make some toast. “Jess” My mom yelled “What?” ” Im leaving now” This is Miss Shay, “Ok” I said. My mother left and I was stuck with this maniac, She started talking to me in the weirdest accent you could possibly talk in, i had never heard anybody talk like this. I sat on one couch while she sat on another. I asked her ” where are you from” ” Britain” she replied.. After she said that I was officially creeped out!! Hours passed asking questions and we started to reall talk serious then her accent changed to French…

My mom came home and  the weird sitter left.. I don’t know but i think my mom heard me say,” FINALLLYYY” in my bedroom..??

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Injured-ch.1 - July 3, 2010 by Marlee

I awakened on the hospital bed with my mothers blue eyes staring me down, I didn’t know what they were doing to me, sticking needles in me one by one. I sat up with my wondering eyes, “mom what happened to me” I asked, My mother spoke while still weeping, ” Margeret u fell down a flight of stairs”, Right then in there I knew I was different.

All a sudden we heard a knock on the door, It was Dr. Jean, He had came in to checkup on me, he wasn’t very happy that day, and neither was I when I heard the bad news.  He went on to tell us I was brave, and I could’ve been killed. But the bad news troubled me even more. The thing wrong with me was that I broke three bones in my foot and two in my hand and I have a big gash in the back of my head. That night I had to stay the night at the hospital since I was still in shock.. I went home the morning after and had a blast with my family..

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 3, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 3 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 3

“gggggggnnnnnnnnn waaaaaaaw” “wakey wakey…..BOO!” Fathom was strugling to wake me up but the only reason I was sleeping is becouse of the feeling.Yes I know i’v been talking about alot latly but it’s just so stroung and weird I don’t understand.”Ok campers were here get out”Her yelling voice woke me up to see I was the only one left on the bus.My bag was gone so Fathom must of took it again.”Sorry I was a little tiered.” I apoigised to her becouse she has to keep the bus running or it’s garanteed a kid will be walking through and the doors will close on them and she will get sued once for that twice becouse she’d probly be so mad she’d kill some one else like me.”Get up!” “well..uhh ok..” when I got up she didn’t let me leave.I was cornerd!She grabed my shirt and said”I….will harm you…” I was so scared but I had to stand up for my self so I used somthing cheesey I heard in a movie “that a threat…or is that a promise..?” “a promise” and she raised me higher! I had to do somthing but what oh I don’t want to do this!I slowly grabed a pocket knife  out of my pant’s pocket it looked like a little oval and she had no idia what it was utill I pressed the button slowly and  said”a promise huah?”and she put me down had and left.”

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 3, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 4 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 4

“That was weird..”I said “What?” “Well…for starters the bus driver is out to kill me…..” “Oh please yeah right !” “OK then why did she keep me from leaving,lift me up on the ground and say I will harm you…?”I said sort of angrily as we were walking down the hill to our cabin “That’s weird….so anyway where’s your bag?”she asked “uh…” “you know teal,big,handles,all your stuff is in it…..” “I thought you had it…”I said cautiously.”Oh great!Someones out to kill me and now my stuff is gone!!!You know you were right,everything will be fine.This is the best camp ever!” “Don’t frett my pet we’ll get your stuff back and befor we do you can share with me.”She was so ok about it it made me mad……..did I say mad?I ment STEAMING.”How could you not care?!!!” “I-” “you know what..don’t  answer that!You never care about anything I do!” “I’m trying to help and i’m going to help look for it.” Not JUST about that!A lady that we don’t even kow is going to “harm me” and you said it your self….”and I began to whisper.”you don’t even care…” “I did not!” “YES YOU DID TOOO!WHAT YOU SAID WAS “OHOH!THATS KINDA WEIRD!!UHHUHUHU!” “Well…..if thats the way you feel….then….I would love t..”and tearse welled up in Fathom’s pretty hazel eyes. “to make you happy…..” “huh?” “Well it seems you would have a better life feeling scared and sorry for your self all alone….so you officaly have no best friends…i’m going to miss you Madison…”And she walked away from me for the very first,and the very last time.

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 3, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 2 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 5

So it’s been 3 days since Fathom left me and 3 day that i’v been hiding in the showers to cry SHHH! please….don’t tell her.Every morning I wake up 2 hours early because of what was torchering me,the terible feeling.And every morning I say to my self “what else could possobly go wrong?My best friend left,I lost my luggage,an old lady is trying to kill me…”what else?I was sitting in bed thinking….if only I could see her one more time to apolagiser. “Hi.”It worked!Fathoms here! “Fathom i’m so-” “-sorry I know..it’s ok.”And she hugged me.Wow!”oh no!”I said “What?”she ask very worriedly “Somthing bad is happening!” “not again!I promise!” “right now!The feeling gone!” ‘It’s probaly because we had a fight and it’s over!Ok?” “Ok.Thanks Fathom” “Noooo problemmmm!”

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Ilurin (The Auto-magical Return!) - July 3, 2010 by Asia DeBoard
This entry is part 7 of 10 in the series Ilurin----chapter 1 And I fell

Authors note: Sorry i haven’t been on in a while…grandmother just passed away :( So are you ready for Ilurin the auto-magical return! I have re-written the entire story that everyone has already seen and will begin posting like normal again. P.s. Thanks for all the awesome comments from all you awesome people!

1.The dream

A little girl with firey red hair stared in horror as her home burned. Burned. A woman with platinum blonde hair gasped her final breaths as she burned to death. Burned. A teenage girl and a boy slightly older than the younger girl stared at her. Their eyes filled with anger, sorrow, and betrayal. A crazed woman cackled as everything around her……Burned.

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Mae Sori woke in a cold sweat. Her long red hair falling in her mahogany eyes. Still shaken she got up and began her chores. As she decended from the attic bedroom of her tiny home she heard an insult being thrown outide.

Io’s home…

Mae smiled as she went outside to watch the two girls who raised her bicker. They were fighting over something dumb, like the kind of meat Io had brought home from hunting. Shae hissed incoherantly at Io, her eleven voice sounded like waves crashing on beach shores. Io spit a threat back. Her half god half human voice sounded as though someone had added salt to honey.

Mae sighed.

What a way to kick off my birthday.

Shae hissed another taunt and Io snapped. She grabbed her katar and lunged at Shae. The elven girl diloged an axe from a nearby tree stump. Mae’s eyes became huge as her “sisters” fought. She stood up from the rock she had been sitting on a accidentally cast a fire ball in between the two.

Shae and Io stared at Mae with worry. Mae’s eyes got even bigger as she watched them steam. She subconsiously backed up and fell over the same exact rock she was sitting on moments ago. Her hair whipped at her face the world came rushing up as she fell. Remarkably, she remained awake the entire way.

MEANWHILE

“Hahahahahahahaha! Dude! Your face!” Blissatheara DiGona the last faerie chortled.
“Was it that funny?”Akooji Akitharos younger one of the Vampiric Ovaltin Princes asked meakly.
“Hey ‘Ji….Is that….?”
“MAE!!!!”The boy ran forward catching the falling girl just in time. He grinned at his childhood friend, accidentally showing his fangs.

Aaaa-Yeeeek!!!

The Red-headed girl squealed and fainted.

2. …..WHAT!?

Mae’s eyes fluttered open, she was in an unfamiliar room, in an unfamiliar bed, and sitting in a chair next to the bed dozing was a vaguely familiar girl. She had the size of an average eleven year old, but the build of an average twenty year old martial artist. She had mid-length strawberry-blonde curly hair, had a bronze hue to her skin, and was thin as a rail, most would say the tiny girl was beautiful, but the thing that would cause people to stray from her direction would be her most dominant attribute, from her back protruded two gold butterfly-like wings.

The girl stirred and began to talk in her sleep, “No….Amaenatia…..”

Mae froze. The fairy knew her full name. How? That name is the only memory Mae has. And not even ShaeKai, or Iotatsu know about that name.

“Amaenata….your father…..”

Okay, The fairy knew about her FATHER? It was too weird. Mae’s father left her and her mother when she was very young. Mae wouldn’t remember him even without her amnesia.

“…He doesn’t like ‘Ji cause…….he’s a…..vampire….”

Mae hadn’t realized she had sat up and had gotten so close to the girl’s face that she could smell her breath. She pulled her head back milliseconds before the girl snapped her head up in alertness.

“I fell asleep? Mae! How long have you been awake?”

“Uh, just a couple minutes. How do you know my name?”

“Hajji told everyone all about you.”

“Who’s Hajji?”

“Your father.”

Mae swallowed hard. “Who’s ” ‘Ji”? ”

“Where’d you hear that name?”

“You talk in your sleep. Who’s ‘Ji. Is it that Vampire from earlier? How do you know my full name? How do you know my father? Where am I? WHO ARE YOU?”

The fairy sighed. “In order; ‘Ji is short for Akooji, he is a childhood friend of yours who knew you before the accident in which you lost your memory. Yes he is that vampire that saved your life. Your father told us all about you, including your full name, Amaenata. He belongs to and is the leader of our resistance army against the Queen Ivy Armoin. You are at our base, which at the moment is a fake Inn that charges way to much so no one wants to stay here. Finally, I am Blissatheara DiGona. I was your best friend before the accident and I am the last Living fairy. You may call me ‘Bliss’, ‘Ara’, ‘Lissa’ or anything else you like, just don’t call me by my last name.”

Mae was just about to ask why not to call Bliss by her last name when there was a knock at the door.

<People are getting testy knowing Reine is here.> the voice was a mixed accent of Both Vampiric and Elven origins creating a beautifully dangerous voice.

“Come in, Random!” Bliss called out.

Just as Mae had thought the owner of the voice was of both Vampiric and Elven origins. His skin had the paleness of a vampire, but still held the blue hue of an elf.

“Mae, this is Random. The most culture mixed person in the army, he speaks all twenty nine languages of the kingdom of DiTerra.”

“Welcome, Koningin.” He bowed at Mae. It made her feel weird seeing is to how she was in Pajamas. Wait, PAJAMAS? How did she get into PAJAMAS?

Mae ignored the fact that Bliss most likely changed her while she was unconscious angrily, and focused on her Dutch. “Uh, dank u, elanden.”

The man looked at her funny, and Bliss laughed at loud. ” I think you mean ‘ Dank u, vriend.’ You said ‘Thank you, Moose.”

Mae blushed. Her Latin was better than most people’s but her Dutch was terrible.

“It is muy bueno. I guess I can be a moose, but only because La Reina said so.”

“Why do you keep referring to me as a queen?”

“Uh, that is algo que hablar about with Amari. Anyway, get dressed and get down stairs. People are Hayvanlar sev when they want to see you.”

Bliss got up and went to the closet. “We’re the same size when it comes to shirts, but you’ll have to talk to Shae about borrowing some pants or a skirt or something, your to tall for mine.

“My sisters are here?”

“Just Shae annd please don’t call her your sister anymore, it might offend your real sister, Zo.”

“I have a real sister?”

“And a brother who is married and lives on his own with two children; Mamako the boy and Maigo the girl.”

“Wow, what’s his name?” Mae just realized that Bliss had already put a dress on her. Well, it would have been a dress on Bliss, but it was just a shirt on Mae.

“Yu–ki” Bliss struggled pulling off the tiny dress and replacing it with a larger one, but it still was just a long shirt on her. “I will be right back. We need to borrow something from Shae.”

Not two minutes after Bliss had left, someone walked in the room, she was glad Bliss hadn’t yet removed her pajama pants. It was that Vampire, Akooji.

“Hey,”

“Hi,”

“So, being held captive by your own subjects?”

“Why does everyone keep calling me a Queen?”

“Well, Hajji retired. Your mom’s..uh, sorry..Yuki enjoys his quiet life, Zo refuses to get married, and honestly you are the best for for the job. And after we defeat Ivy, Onihime, my brother, and the rest of the imperial army, you have to get married and become our leader.”

“You sure it’ll take that long? I’m only thirteen.”

“Thirteen? Your well older than that! Your one-thousand nineteen years old!”

“….WHAT!?”

“Mae! I’m not supposed to be here! Be quiet!” Akooji ran to the door, but Bliss was standing on the other side, waiting, tapping her foot. “Uh, sorry. I know I’m not supposed to talk to the queen without properly asking for an audience from her father.”

Bliss looked unimpressed.

“You’ve been coming in here very ten minutes to see how she’s doing. It’s one thing if she actually touched the ground when she fell.

“Bliss, you wouldn’t leave her side for two days after the first time she tripped and scraped her knee. You have no room to judge me for worrying about her after she fell off a cliff.”

“Admettre se vous son en amor avec su.” This language was one that only Bliss and ‘Ji knew. It was a mixture of French and Spanish. You alternate between the two with the words. What she said was; ‘Admit it, you’re in love with her.’

“No.”

“Fine, you created your own suffering. I offered you an out.”

“I’ll take it happily. The suffering, I mean. I’m not gonna do what you say.”

“JUST GET OUT OF HERE!” Bliss slammed the door and marched over and handed Mae some shorts.”They’ll have to do. All we have of your’s is a bunch of clothes for toddlers.”

“You don’t like him much, do you?”

“Do you?”

“Maybe.”

Bliss smiled. Her goal was in sight.

Mae looked at herself in the mirror in Bliss’ room. She was wearing the oddest clothing. This was the weirdest birthday ever. It all started with her falling off a cliff and ending with a party full of rebels she didn’t know. Bliss came out of her closet with another dress and a pair of shoes that were merely soles with ribbons to tie them on. Mae scowled. Girly. Yuck. So much attention. AND it was all from people she didn’t know. Of course she did know them, she just didn’t remember them.

“Wear the dress as a skirt. We don’t have any of your clothes. That last time you were here you were eight. And I happen to be the smallest person here.”

“Okay. ”

“You have 69 seconds. Hurry up and get down there. Oh and if ‘Ji comes in here again I might do something you wouldn’t like.” Mae shivered and put on her clothes. Bliss was scary.

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Mae scaled the stairs and was in the main room of the inn, it was practically empty. Music was playing although there were no instruments, nor musicians. Just the composer moving her hand in nothingness creating the music without a single word. Mae recognized some of the people. Akooji was sitting with  Bliss and Shae at one table, and A man, woman, Random, and the composer were at the other. The composer opened one eye and smiled. Mae noticed something. The girl had short cut black hair and reddish orange eyes. She had a oval face and a long thin build, it was like looking in a mirror, she must be Zo.

She smiled wider and motioned Mae over. Mae followed suit. She sat down next to her. The composer took Mae’s hands and guided them in the same motions as she was doing. The music became shaky and and unpracticed and there was even a squeak. The girls laughed the same wind chime laugh. ‘Ji cracked a smile and the man and woman looked at the girls happily. Shae and Bliss cracked up but their laughs weren’t as pure or light hearted as the identical girls. Random put his arm around Mae and hugged her. ‘Ji’s smile disappeared. Mae didn’t fight the embracement. There was something about these people that was inviting.

“Happy birthday, mon amour.”

“Thank you, mon ami.”

The man  laughed one last time and shook Random playfully. “Okay, okay. Break it up, you two. I think we should properly introduce ourselves before we start flirting.”

Mae giggled. Zo hugged her. Bliss, Shae, and ‘Ji pulled their chairs over to the table where everyone else sat.

“Amaenata, My name is Hajji. I’m your father. This is Blissatheara DiGona, she is the last living fairy and was a close friend of yours in the past. We call her Bliss most of the time. This is your twin sister Zo, She creates music with movements of her body. ” Zo clapped her hands and it sounded like a crash of simbals. Hajji continued. “The elf who has taken part in re-raising you is ShaeKai Talin. She is also a good friend of yours from the past. The boy that kept sneaking in to talk with you is Akooji Akitharis. He is another of your friends. The boy that can’t keep his hands off you and can’t speak less than two languages per sentence is Random Naro. He is a good friend of our entire family and is welcome here anytime. This woman is Eiryyka Armoin-Sori. She is my second wife, your step-mother, and elder sister of the Queen Ivy. We brought you here to celebrate your 1019th birthday!

“Wait. I thought I was thirteen.” Mae questioned.

“Shae you never told her?”

“Iotatsu was difficult. She refused.”Shae responded meakly.

“Mae the reason you lived this long is that you are half angel and you have been inhabited by the spirit of the Phoenix.”

“Which explains that fireball from this morning.” Shae finished.

The table got really quiet. Zo slammed her hand down on the table and it sounded like a bass drum. “If I have to be surrounded by music, then I don’t want it to be some classical junk! It’s a party! Let’s give a bit of Yankee to it.”

“Yankee?” asked her father.

“A rebel touch.” Bliss commented.

Impressionante!” Random repiled.

“I’ll be right back.” Eiryyka said and darted behind the counter of the bar.

“Would you like to dance?” Akooji asked Mae.

“Of, course. But we need some music.” Mae smiled at her sister.

“She needs to dance for music to play, Mlle le, would you like to dance?”

Si?

Correcta.”

The children began to dance. A fast tango like  song played. Eiryyka fumbled in the kitchen. Hajji watched his group play.

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Eiryyka brought out a cake. Hajji placed candles on it and motioned over Mae. Everyone gathered around around the birthday cake with unlit candles. Mae ttok a deep breath and so did Zo, although she wouldn’t have an effect other than making a short flute tweet. Mae blew onto the candles and lit them.

Mae laughed. Hajji smiled at ‘Ji, “Would you mind?”

‘Ji smiled at Mae and leaned in close and preformed the same actions as she, but he caused the candles’ fire to freeze in place. Mae’s mouth gaped. He beamed at her.

“Happy birthday, girls.” Everyone shouted. Random wrapped his arms around Mae again. ‘Ji glared at him for several moments, but soon the room was full of dancing people and conversations.

“How’d you do that?”

“You know how a Phoenix is a fire bird.”

“Yeah?”

“And your inhabited by the phoenix?”

“Uh-huh”

“I’m inhabited by an ice-bird.”

“Wait, so is Zo a songbird?”

The two cracked up. Random glared. He still was holding her, but had been pushed from the conversation.

Suddenly someone broke the door open. The three hid behind the bar.

“Where is she?” Said a voice.

“Who?” Hajji spoke.

“The girl who’s birthday it is.” It was the voice again.

“That would be me.” Zo chimed.

“I meant the Queen, not the Duchess. The smell of her flame reeks in here.”

Eiryyka tried to break in, “I think ya have the wrong inn, boy. Just a group of friends getting together on a birthday.”

“Where’s my brother?”

“The kitchen.” Said Bliss, “I’ll go get him.”

Bliss came around the bar into the kitchen and grabbed a knife.

“Go to the milita. Meet us in Arik. Here take this.” Bliss handed Mae the knife. “We can handle Akito, but not trying to protect you guys. Run! Random, stay here, we’ll need your help.”

Akooji took Mae’s hand and ran out the back door. He ran with her out of the town.

“We need to get into Evania, we can loose them in the cities.” He was talking to himself.

” ‘Ji,”

“Yeah,”

“Who’s the militia?”

“There are two, but one is just Shae and her brother. We’re going to the Wolf Meniva Militia. Come on, they could could be behind us.”

“Who?”

“The people who killed your mother.”

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Love - July 3, 2010 by Marlee

L- lots of hugs!!

O- the only one!!

V- Very kind!!

E- Every moment!!

 

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The School Bully- ch.1 part 2 - July 3, 2010 by Marlee
This entry is part 1 of 1 in the series The School Bully- ch.1 part 2

 Dear Diary,

Well we were standing in the nurses office anxiously waiting for the nurse to come,I  could of sworn we had been waiting for at least five minutes, then finally the nurse came in and asked us what had happened. I said, ” Claire Garson beat us up” “Okay well i need u to bend your head back so it will stop bleeding” The nurse said. Our noses stopped bleeding, when the nurse got a call from Mr. Geoff saying to send us to his office. Abby, Jenny and me were walking to his office, and knocked on his door, He said to come in. “have a seat girls” Mr. Geoff said..Claire was sitting in the chair right next to me.. Mr. Geoff Said ” So what happened”, Well i started saying “Well at lunch Jenny didnt give her cheese stick to Claire and i think thats why she made our noses bleed” Claire looked at me like she was mad!! Claire got kicked out of school, We found out what she did at her old school, and we never got bullied again, except theres a new student in our class… Well thats another story                                            Bye Diary…

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The School Bully - July 3, 2010 by Marlee

Dear Diary,               

We were sitting in Mrs. Berry’s class when the principle walked in with a new student, He said her name was Claire Garson, And shes new. Her old school kicked her out for some reason we dont know. I knew she was different from the time she walked in. Finally the principle left and we started again. Time passed and finally lunch was here, My mom had packed me a lunch today since it was spagetti for lunch. So there we were Jenny, Abby and Me all sitting at our favorite table by the cute boys. We were gonna ask her to come sit with us but she had already joined us. First she asked Jenny what she was eating, Salami sandwhich, Potato chips and a cheese stick. “Gimme your cheese stick now!!” Said Claire”.No Said Jenny. Why.” Because  there mine”. After lunch we had recess, we walked out with Claire and came in with bloody noses. We went to the nurse in tears, while Claire headed to the principles office with a grin on her face……

To Be Continued……

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