Day: 24. January 2012

Need Feedback! - January 24, 2012 by bellagy419

Hi guys! :)   I’m considering doing a series of short stories and I want to see what you guys think of my basic idea first. What I want to do is write a series of short stories describing everyday places, such as a pizza store, a cafeteria, and a coffee shop.  I like doing descriptive writing and I would like to write about and look differently at everyday things and places. What do you think?

P.S.: Thanks! :)

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“Weird”- Chapter 2 - January 24, 2012 by bellagy419
This entry is part 2 of 7 in the series "Weird"

JANUARY 12, 2012

Today school was as normal. Something, nothing, more nothing. That was what the learning was like, of course. The activities other than class were much different.

You know how every year there’s a different fad? A new fad has been born: zapping. You write a time on the back of somebody’s hand and on their palm, you write a person of the opposite gender’s name. If you look at your palm before the time, you need to ask that person out. Naturally, this is just fuel for the machine that is gossip.  I got a little goofy during the after-school science program I go to because Emma zapped me and go figure: she wrote the name of the kid I have a crush on.  God, I’m getting stereotypical. Sometimes it’s hard not to.  I’m stopping before I turn in to one of those kids in books with titles like “How I Survived Middle School”.

I sat back and sighed. I liked journals. I got my thoughts out and told every detail I wanted, without fear of mocking or someone spilling the beans. Notebooks allow you to spill your thoughts fearlessly. And that’s just perfect for me or anybody who lives with a bossy fourteen-year old sister.

(P.S: Thanks guys for all the comments! Keep them coming!)

 

 

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