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Drama,Death,Camp - July 2, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 1 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

 

“I’m so nevous!” I told my best friend Fathom “You’l be fine,I’ll be fine,the whole camp will be fine!Why are you exctremly all of a sudden deathly nurvous?” “I…..I..I don’t know I just feel like somthing horafing is going to happen. “Well it’s not……..I promise.” She said thoughs last two words so sincer and so caring I felt like crying.”Okey so lets get packing”Fathom said.”Ok I think I have everyting can you read the check list of again to me please?”I asked.”yeah sure ok sunscreen?” “check” “bathing suit?” “check” “soap” “check” “shampoo” “check” “conditoner” “who needs that?” she gave me the” oh please your gross”look and I put it in my teal gym bag as she moved on “2 towals” “check” “gogles” “not needed” “c.d player” “check” “c.ds” “duh” “underwere” “uh..check” I whisperd “bra” “OH ok thats enoegh yeah got all that just skip to pants ok” “well uh that was next but ok pants” “check” and as we went though the rest of the list mist,skimed,skiped,as it came to dawn we finaly went to bed and got few hours of sleep and when I awoke I had a tirrable feeling all over again

                                                                                                                             Chapter 2

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 3, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 2 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 5

So it’s been 3 days since Fathom left me and 3 day that i’v been hiding in the showers to cry SHHH! please….don’t tell her.Every morning I wake up 2 hours early because of what was torchering me,the terible feeling.And every morning I say to my self “what else could possobly go wrong?My best friend left,I lost my luggage,an old lady is trying to kill me…”what else?I was sitting in bed thinking….if only I could see her one more time to apolagiser. “Hi.”It worked!Fathoms here! “Fathom i’m so-” “-sorry I know..it’s ok.”And she hugged me.Wow!”oh no!”I said “What?”she ask very worriedly “Somthing bad is happening!” “not again!I promise!” “right now!The feeling gone!” ‘It’s probaly because we had a fight and it’s over!Ok?” “Ok.Thanks Fathom” “Noooo problemmmm!”

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 3, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 3 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 3

“gggggggnnnnnnnnn waaaaaaaw” “wakey wakey…..BOO!” Fathom was strugling to wake me up but the only reason I was sleeping is becouse of the feeling.Yes I know i’v been talking about alot latly but it’s just so stroung and weird I don’t understand.”Ok campers were here get out”Her yelling voice woke me up to see I was the only one left on the bus.My bag was gone so Fathom must of took it again.”Sorry I was a little tiered.” I apoigised to her becouse she has to keep the bus running or it’s garanteed a kid will be walking through and the doors will close on them and she will get sued once for that twice becouse she’d probly be so mad she’d kill some one else like me.”Get up!” “well..uhh ok..” when I got up she didn’t let me leave.I was cornerd!She grabed my shirt and said”I….will harm you…” I was so scared but I had to stand up for my self so I used somthing cheesey I heard in a movie “that a threat…or is that a promise..?” “a promise” and she raised me higher! I had to do somthing but what oh I don’t want to do this!I slowly grabed a pocket knife  out of my pant’s pocket it looked like a little oval and she had no idia what it was utill I pressed the button slowly and  said”a promise huah?”and she put me down had and left.”

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 3, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 4 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 4

“That was weird..”I said “What?” “Well…for starters the bus driver is out to kill me…..” “Oh please yeah right !” “OK then why did she keep me from leaving,lift me up on the ground and say I will harm you…?”I said sort of angrily as we were walking down the hill to our cabin “That’s weird….so anyway where’s your bag?”she asked “uh…” “you know teal,big,handles,all your stuff is in it…..” “I thought you had it…”I said cautiously.”Oh great!Someones out to kill me and now my stuff is gone!!!You know you were right,everything will be fine.This is the best camp ever!” “Don’t frett my pet we’ll get your stuff back and befor we do you can share with me.”She was so ok about it it made me mad……..did I say mad?I ment STEAMING.”How could you not care?!!!” “I-” “you know what..don’t  answer that!You never care about anything I do!” “I’m trying to help and i’m going to help look for it.” Not JUST about that!A lady that we don’t even kow is going to “harm me” and you said it your self….”and I began to whisper.”you don’t even care…” “I did not!” “YES YOU DID TOOO!WHAT YOU SAID WAS “OHOH!THATS KINDA WEIRD!!UHHUHUHU!” “Well…..if thats the way you feel….then….I would love t..”and tearse welled up in Fathom’s pretty hazel eyes. “to make you happy…..” “huh?” “Well it seems you would have a better life feeling scared and sorry for your self all alone….so you officaly have no best friends…i’m going to miss you Madison…”And she walked away from me for the very first,and the very last time.

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 3, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 5 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 6

“So why did you decide to come in my cabin in the first place?”I ask ,even if I was glade for it to be over with.”I…..don’t think you need to know that I mean…ppsh pa tsh pa ta phs…” “WHY?” “I came in to take your friends…” “ah!”I said with a grin.”well you-” “your so like me!”I interruptedand we laughed for a while as the feeling came back to me but I was learning to ignore it so it didn’t bother me like it used to and I didn’t have to ask Fathom about the promise thing,unfortunatelyI had to tell it to myself very often.”She is isn’t she?” “who said that?” Fathom asked scared.I was scared too because I thought we were alone in the pool but I’d know that voice anywhere.It was THE BUS DRIVER.

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Drama,Death,Camp…..2 promises unfinished - July 4, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 6 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 7

Oh no!This can’t be good I thought to myself. “I promised I would heart you and my promise will be failed in 3 minutes.”And she left. “Fathom time now!” “Ok in 3 min. it’ll be midnight.” MIDNIGHT….that echoedthrough my brian all the way to the back of my head over and over and over again and the ehco go louder as they started to scream my ears ringing and I panicked! “10 seconds!” fathom yelled.I looked around everywhere not knowing what to do,everything was in slow motion and I heard a scream  and and the bus driver yell “MY PROMISE IF FAILED!I WON’T HEART YOU!I WILL-” and then she was gone…Madiwas gone…dead….and so was Lauren….the bus driver was dead because of me……”I killed someone!A LIFE!A cherished life!” I screamed at the top of my lungs hoping someone will here me and take me away in a box.

THE BUS DRIVER……………….

                                                                                                                                                            TO BE CONTTIUED……?

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 6, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 7 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 8

I sat…I sat in my room wondering how long I’d be sitting there…..I couldn’t understand…..I didn’t wan to understand…..Why did this happen…….Why to me….”Fathom Mary NarstGet down here right now!How long do you expect me to let you sit around and be moup huh? I know you want to see Madi again but you will next school year.”She didn’t know….no one knew except me.I drug myself downstairs and heard the fireplace crackling.I could feel the warm spark es against my skin.My mother gave me my dinner of spaghetti and apple juice and she left me.I was home  alone and scared.All the other times I was home alone I’d call Madi.Speaking of that the phone was ringing.”Hello?”I asked.”Hi Fathom is your mom there?” “no sorry she just left.Do you want to leave her a message?’ “no thanks……You wouldn’t happen to know were my daughter is do you?” “uhh…” should I tell her?I thought. “Umm…No…I’m sorry Ms.durpan” “Oh..well thank you.”she said quietly.Oh why did I do that?KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 16, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 8 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

Chapter 9

Who could that be?I didn’t really want to answer the door but something was calling me,leading me,so I walk up to the door and looked through the peep whole.No one was there.How odd.I opened the door anyway.WOOSH________.What was that?A slightly cold breeze came rushing through and didn’t stop.It was like I was frozen.”Faaatthhhooomm”I heard my name creaking through the house and all the windows flew open,the fan turned on high…..way high.Papers went flying all around and  even the pillows were moving and spinning.”FAAAAAATTTTTTHHHHOOOMMM”I was breathing heavily,my heart was pounding and I was afraid it would here me”Yes…..it’s me…im Fathom…” “FAAATTHHHOOOMM I NEED YOUR HELP” “The room was spinning and I felt dizzy and sick.I heard something.CRASH!I had a chill.And every thing went black.

Sorry fans and readers.I haven’t been writing lately.But you will be hearing a lot from me for a while.Luv Ya Fans!

your truly,

Madi

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 16, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 9 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

I awoke to see my surroundings.Madi….Madi!Shes here! ”Madi it’s you it’s you!And I ran to her to hug her.And…I ran into the table….”But wait.” I said “I don’t understand Madi!Whats going on?” “Yes it’s me I’m here to help you with…” “With what?” “With your life.”Her voice echoed through the room. “My..my life?What are you talking about?” “Lauren is not dead yet.I’m here to help you Fathom.” “Lauren?Who the heck is Lauren?” “THE BUS DRIVER.”Just hearing that name made me shiver and I could here her insane laugh flowing through the camp right be for she murdered herself.I know I said Ii killed her and I did.She killed herself because of me. “wait if shes not dead and your here….Your not dead!-” and she interrupted me.”Yes…I’m sorry but….I am…Im dead.” “then how are you here this is crazy Madi!” “I’m a Ghost”ghost ecoed through like her beautiful voice used to in my head.But this time it was real.

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Drama,Death,Camp - July 16, 2010 by Madi
This entry is part 10 of 10 in the series Drama,Death,Camp

“So what your telling me Lauren isn’t dead?How she committed suicide!” “Well…” Her voice still echoed through my ear drums pounding hard. “She faked it.She never killed herself.And now shes traveling.” “To hide from the cops…?” “No…looking for you.”I froze.Shes looking for me!?Oh no. “We got to go!” I screamed and tried to run out the door but she stopped me.”No!We have to kill her!” “Hey how can you touch me if you I can’t even feel you?” “NOT NOW!” she yelled “We need to make a plan!” “Ok fine we will make a plan.”I said calmly “Ok!Thank you!”Madi said with a face like “finely you agree with me!” “ok I got a plan.” I said “you do!Great what is it?” “RUUUUUUUUUUUNNN!” I scream as loud as I could and I ran while she was tying to get her hearing back.

           A little while latter I found myself lost.Lost in time….

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