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The One Man Army - January 30, 2012 by ealenate
This entry is part 1 of 7 in the series The One Man Army

The One Man Army
GIVE ME ADVISE PLEASE

“We will be landing soon,” a pilot reassured his passengers looking outside at the stormy mess. In the back of the plane three men in dark suits were talking suspiciously. A little harmless boy with a t-shirt and shorts sat on the seat next to them. The three men looked over the plane calmly. There was nobody who were a threat to their plan. I mean like a little eleven year old could fight them. After all they were trained spies from Russia.

They decided it was time. While two of the men ran to take over the controls the other threatened the passengers with a gun. “Everyone on the floor,” the man shouted waving his gun around crazily. There was a brief moment of shock then the dull hearing of bodies dropping on the floor. “We won’t hurt you just stay still,” The man said looking around. What he didn’t notice was the eleven year old silently crawled under the seats getting closer and closer. Finally the boy reached him standing directly behind him ready for the final blow. The man however sensed his presence and swung his fist in a semi circle right toward his head.

The boy blocked the blow with his left hand and slammed an elbow into his attackers temple. The man toppled to the floor unconscious and the boy grabbed the gun from him and said, “I have a problem,” he said in a deep voice imitating the man’s. “Yes Henry,” said a voice. The door to the pilot cockpit flew open and two men strode in overconfident. “Everything is going………., ” his voice trailed off as he looked at the young boy holding a gun pointed right at him. “Drop your weapons,” The kid demanded impatiently.

“You wouldn’t kill us would you?” the men said nervously. “Fine I won’t kill you,” the boy said looking at them. “You never said I couldn’t hurt you,” he told them while shooting the gun in rapid succession at both of there legs. Once they collapsed with pain the boy vaulted over them and into the pilots chair. “Oh its in autopilot,” he murmured to himself while adjusting the gears so they could land at the nearest airport.

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Chapter Two of The One Man Army - January 30, 2012 by ealenate
This entry is part 2 of 7 in the series The One Man Army

Chapter Two of The One Man Army Tell me how you like it

The boy lowered down the radio from the roof of the plane, “Sir I got them,”"Nice job Tyler,” The reply came back almost immediately. “Over and out,” the boy said smiling to himself. He went back into the passengers area because he needed to check on the men. He walked into the room completely aware of the fact that they were awake but didn’t have guns. They were of no threat to him if they didn’t have guns. When he walked into the room however they were gone.

Suddenly he heard the air whoosh behind him. He ducked and kicked backwards hitting someone hard. He whirled around with guns in both hands. They quickly surrendered and the boy handcuffed them. “Thanks,” a passenger said as the passengers got themselves off the floor. “It’s okay,” the boy said. “We’ll be landing soon .” The boy made his way through the passengers and into the pilots cabin. “Okay so I line the miniature airplane to the radar line,” Tyler murmured to himself as he steered the airplane on the line.

“There’s the airplane,” a man whispered to the commander of National security. “Yep and our best spy is in it,” The commander told is the airport manager urgently. “Yes sir We got one ready,” reassured the airport manager. The airplane landed perfectly without a glitch. “Let’s go meet our hero,” the commander said smiling to himself. Once the plane stopped, Tyler walked out carrying three over sized men out of the door. “Sir there all yours,” Tyler responded dropping the men at the commanders feet. By now the passengers were already out of the plane going home as they talked about the young boy who saved them. “You did okay,” the commander tried not to smile. Tyler smiled then asked, “Can we get something to eat.”

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Chapter three of The One Man Army - January 31, 2012 by ealenate
This entry is part 3 of 7 in the series The One Man Army

“I didn’t do that good,” Tyler protested waving his arms in defense. “I mean those guts were really clumsy and had no clue of where I was going to hit next so it wasn’t a challenge.” “Yeah well you still did amazing job,” the commander exclaimed looking out the window of Taco Bell while Tyler gulped huge bites of his three burritos. “MMMMYHIHIH,” Tyler tried to say as he ate three bites at the same time.

“What,” replied the commander confused. “Sorry I meant what’s our next mission?” Tyler asked. “Well let’s see,”He said looking over a sheet of reports from surrounding cities. “The Royal Bank Scotland was robbed last night so I’m sending you there.” “How am I going there,” he asked uncertain. “Don’t worry, that car outside will take you to an airplane,”He told me. “Capture the thief but no heroics, okay?” “Sure,” I replied reassuringly as I walked out of the door and into the car.

When we finally got to the airport Tyler was tired. Then he clumsy got past security, jumped on the plane, and fell asleep. He woke up to the sound of the loudspeaker,”We are landing soon Please exit calmly.” I murmured,” Stupid loudspeaker.” When the plane landed I jumped off and headed for a taxi. There was one with yellow striped body and black on the roof. It was the coolest taxi I have ever seen. I waved it over and told the English guy where I wanted to go. He nodded like   he understand what I said and took off. He went so fast I thought I died. H swerved between traffic taking sharp corners and going 60 miles over the speed limit. Then he took a sharp turn and we did a wheelie spinning off the side of a bridge.

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Chapter 4 of The One Man Army - February 3, 2012 by ealenate
This entry is part 4 of 7 in the series The One Man Army

GIVE ME ADVISE AND COMMENTS

As we headed for the edge I saw the driver smile and yank the steering wheel back sending us straight down the road. “May we slow down a bit,” I asked clearly nervous. “Slow no way,” he yelled over the radio as he raised the speed from 120 to 130. Finally he swerved around a rich neighborhood and stopped near a high-secured building. “Thank you I guess,” I yelled at him over the radio. He gave me thumbs up and then swerving up the street he disappeared from view.

I walked slowly up the steps and into the building. It looked organized with no one running around and a quiet atmosphere. The only problem was that it sounded to quiet. There was no one there even the receptionist was gone. The empty desk vacant and the place eerily quiet made everything spooky. I walked slowly through the last pair of doors and suddenly the doors shut behind me. I whirled around and tried to get out but it wouldn’t let me. Then I felt the warm feel of blood on my back. I tried to look where but I was already unconscious.

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Chapter 5 of The One Man Army - February 7, 2012 by ealenate
This entry is part 5 of 7 in the series The One Man Army

The Escape Chapter 5

When I awoke I felt woozy and unstable. I was in a room with bars over the door and windows. It looked like a prison. It probably was. “How did they know I was coming?”I asked myself. “Gosh I should have been more careful,”I sighed angrily with myself. Suddenly the door clanged open and I felt myself staring down a guard with a taser across his chest. “You’re coming with us,”he barked grabbing my arm and heaving me down the hall. While they took me somewhere I studied them. They had tasers but they didn’t know how to use them. They were holding my hands behind my back so tripped them. The floor rang with two heads clunking against it. Those two were out cold. I grabbed their tasers and was about to leave the room when I heard a voice.

“Hey may you get me out of here,”a female voice exclaimed. I heard the voice coming from the barred door next to mine. I snagged the keys from the guard and unlocked her door. Once the door was unlocked a girl about my age came running out and started hugging me saying,”Thanks now let’s get out of here.” She ran out of the room with her long black hair trailing behind her. “Shhhhh once I get you out here you’ll have to explain yourself,”I said. I told her to stay behind me and we quietly walked down the hall looking for a exit. “There’s a guard,”the girl told me pointing to a guard that I was sneaking on. He turned around saw me and ran toward an emergency button where he slammed his hand down on it. Suddenly an alarm came blaring from the building.

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The One Man Army Chapter 6 - February 11, 2012 by ealenate
This entry is part 6 of 7 in the series The One Man Army

One Man Army Chapter 6

I ran toward the guard punching him so he flew backwards. “This is dumb,” I said a little unhappy. “Then I guess we’ll take this the hard way.” I heard alarms and saw a group of guards running in this direction. “I have an idea,” I whispered to the girl. We hid around the corner and waited for the guards to come. When they appeared I stuck my foot out and they went flying. I knocked them out then grabbed their uniforms. “Maybe we can use these to sneak out,” I exclaimed. She looked at them and said, “Okay.” She put it over her shirt so I did the same.

“Walk slowly or else they might suspect something and let me do the talking,” I instructed slowly. “Okay I guess,” she said shyly. We marched right past the guards and nobody said anything. Finally we reached the door that looked like it led up. It had a scanner so I scanned my badge on it. “Clearance accepted,” a voice echoed back. We walked out and we were in the bank again. This time it was full and had those same guards checking for fingerprints. Suddenly they stopped and whipped out M16s and pointed it right at me. “Well, Well what do we have her,” a voice said.

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The One Man Army - April 29, 2012 by ealenate
This entry is part 7 of 7 in the series The One Man Army

The One Man Army

“Okay you ready,” I said to the kid as I got in my fighting stance. “Of course I am,” the kid glanced at the man he had winked at earlier almost nervously. We started circling and looking for openings in the other person’s defense. The kid suddenly glanced up at the girl and exclaimed, “Stop crying.” I looked up at the girl distracted and all I saw was her face alarmed and pointing at something behind me. I whirled around but it was too late a fist crash into my face.

 

I cried out in pain but recovered quickly launching myself at him. I threw a punch at him from the side but then did a undercut to his chin. He flew back crashing into the wall and hitting his head then his head drooped down and I could tell he was unconscious. Then I whirled around and flew at the man who the boy winked at earlier. I heard a whirling noise and quickly ducked and as I expected a knife whirled above me and hit the wall. I dove for the man’s legs and tackled him to the floor. Then as soon as I hit the floor I felt the cold steel against my neck. Then I heard a voice, “Nice Try.”

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